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Demesne 387 - More Of Shanalore At Work

🕑 Added 2024-01-16 16:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Kitty kat

Hehe, even Dungeon Binders must rest! Shanalorre has certainly earned it! Edit notes: Shana sighed and reached towards her friend, following her instincts to form(missing comma?) claim, bind, and tame a meaning, imbuing the meaning(replace 'the meaning' with 'it'?) just enough to do what it needed to. Shana gave Karina a grateful nod as she squatted down onto the space next to her friend and closed her eyes as(should be 'for') the other girl (to) pour(-ed) water over her. The table had three jugs of water and many cups on it—traveling was very thirsting(drying? or maybe 'thirsty work'?) in this heat—and they were talking to the children who'd stayed in Lorian about their respective holidays. Up in(on) the deck and risk of sunburns it was. Once everyone was healed, Shana let them get back to what she(they) was(were) doing, (before) sitting next to Yoshka. Karina (then) took her leave to find her own brothers and sisters(, in order) to make sure they were behaving themselves.

fd05

The woman would probably finish be done soon. -> one verb too many


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