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Becoming Monsters 2: Ch. 51

🕑 Added 2023-04-27 20:10:36 +0000 UTC

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As for why they waited…I hope that will become a little more clear in…*looks at notes*…2 more chapters.

I have tried it many different ways and for Patreon this is the best system I’ve seen it go. Thanks for the suggestion, I am not techno wizardly so it never really occurred to test the limits.

Kenneth Welever

As far as the story goes I love it! But while I understand the urge to save points what I don't understand is that they have a lot of points saved up and could make major improvements to everyone. Maximizing their potential and then getting used to it but they are waiting for a special time to do so. Honestly after that last attack it seems like they are just inviting disaster. Upgrading to higher races, gaining new abilities, fixing problems, and adding to the stat pools is incredibly important and not something that should be delayed.

Kenneth Welever

I know of a few authors who put those sections behind a spoiler box and label it stats/w flavor text. That way it is skippable but you still gain something when you read it. Your chapters are huge and full of content so I wouldn't see doing it either way as a problem.

Fewwifranco

I know you have a plan and all, but I'm really looking forward to learning more about Gwyneth. Especially what she has going on underneath her leper queen ensemble.

To some, chapters like this are boring. People have to realize there are two parts to this. First, for those who are REALLY into LitRPG, this chapter is the moneyshot. I could put in status updates every single chapter and they'd want MORE. Second, the explanations have a purpose. It might not be right now, but somewhere down the line, somewhere in all this text are abilities that will become vital to the plot.

Jacob Osgood

Thanks for the chapters. And thank you for the boxes and explaining the class features.


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