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[SFW] Ex-Yandere Takes You Home
🕑 Added 2025-03-06 19:22:59 +0000 UTCThis is gonna be uploaded to youtube once im done editing the video but is this good? ;n;
I feel like some of it isnt- so please be honest <3
the youtube link will be uploaded here as well so yall can comment and everything before everyone else >w< ty guys so much for helping me out with this! <33
Comments
BenimusPrime
Aside from the volume jumping up in the grocery store, seemed fine to me. I like audios that ad something to the mix. I mean every yandere is supposed to f***ed up and everything, but it's never shown as a detriment. Yandere wins and their life is better for it, etc. I like audios like this and the Tired of Waiting audio where a wrench gets thrown into the whole thing.
sonasaint
overall this was fantastic, in the beginning a little bit it sounds like the mic was peaking, but besides that, the pacing, the writing, the delivery, it is the S tier quality we all know and love. good job and thank you for sharing!!
Ryder Fonseca
Last time I’m watching this *plays it over and over AND OVER* 😣
Diabolical D3vil
Act 1 in the grocery store there's one spot and one other spot just a moment I want to say in the apartment, but this story and acting were excellent.
Arc of Carona
There were moments when there was slight scuff from your mic when you were raising your voice, but other than that amazing delivery as always
Diabolical D3vil
Act 3 is good, really good.
Diabolical D3vil
Listening to Act 2, and love the character there. 🫶 Oh?? 😶🤐 Good SFX use. Like how the pacing goes.
Diabolical D3vil
I was thinking in my head just when I thought I was out they pulled me back in and you did the line!!! Haha —- This is really good, I like it. Listening to Act 2, love the character here.
