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My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 45, Page 21
🕑 Added 2025-02-05 12:21:07 +0000 UTC
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Thanks! I've changed it.
Robmur
Is it me, or does Amanda see you be enjoying herself from the look on her face she seems quite happy in the situation she is in.
Larry_W
SimVenus, the followng is a suggestion only, it is not a correction.. Gabby's thought after Amanda comes: "She's come" - to me this sounds better "She came" The word 'She's' is normally a contraction for 'She is'. Here, you are using 'She's' to mean 'She has', denoting past tense. 'She came' is simpler to me, because came is the past tense of come. Guys, what do you think? π€ Thoughts, conjectures? This may be just a personal preference for me. SimVenus, you choose. π
