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CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE - WILLIAM

🕑 Added 2024-12-19 08:59:31 +0000 UTC

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Sean Reed

I think the way you have it is just right, I could almost tell the exact moment when Supes figured it out and of course he began scanning for her controller while in the middle of still fighting her……..Awesome! Can’t wait to see if he gives Manton the Heat Vison brain surgery he did in Superman Vs The Elite.

OnAHiatus

Yeah, I was tempted to make it take longer for Supes to figure out that she's a projection, but after some thinking, I decided this was better. After all, as you said, Supes is experienced enough and has faced lots of projections throughout the years

Sean Reed

A lot of people forget Superman is not just all muscle and power, he has the brain’s and the intellect to match as well. So no it really would not take very long at all for Superman to figure out the The Siberian was a puppet. Especially with as experienced as this Superman seems to be. At least as you are portraying him anyway. Love it keep up the good work.

OnAHiatus

This was one of the hardest chapters to write, so I'm glad you like it

Silent Night

The build up and tension was great! Portrayed the horror aspect of fighting something as unknown and powerful as Superman really well.


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