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CHAPTER TWELVE - GOING NOWHERE

🕑 Added 2025-01-02 00:27:23 +0000 UTC

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OnAHiatus

That will work. Thanks

Jack Max

The most I can say is maybe have more - if minor- references to Batmans activities. like say Taylor hearing some news about him on tv or regular civillians or Robin saying something about him.

OnAHiatus

Yeah, but I don't know how to work it into the story

Disorder

It'll be great to learn what Batman has been doing all this time. Even ignoring all the crime that happens in Gotham, he also has League business to attend to, and that sometimes ends up with him and space.

OnAHiatus

Yeah, I realised that late, so I'm trying to correct my mistake in the upcoming chapters

Jack Max

I think this was a good change. I've noticed that throughout the story we don't learn much about what Batman is even doing. Granted, we are seeing this from Taylor's perspective, meaning she focuses on the bad guys that other people, but its understandable why she's mad because, while she's obviously wrong, she (and the readers) don't know WHAT Batman has been doing. Which kinda makes him look like he's doing nothing.

Disorder

Yes, love seeing the dark knight again. Taylor really does think she knows it all, that she alone knows how much danger Gotham is in and that no one but her can save it from Ra's because she's the only one taking action. Batman doesn't care about what Taylor thinks of him. If she can't see the things he's done while she's too hyperfocused on fixing the problems in front of her, than that's her problem. Its going to be a nice slap to the face when she realizes that, this guy has been dealing with situations that actually threaten more than a single city. Threats that can affect the world if they aren't stopped. There's no point in saving Gotham if it's destroyed or severely affected by these outside threats. Much as it pains Bruce, he has to focus on the big picture, otherwise more than just Gotham will be lost to these big threats. More importantly, he has to do it because he has the power necessary to stop these threats, and how can he call himself a hero if he ignores the plight of others, even if they don't live in Gotham.

OnAHiatus

I made some changes to it, adding a section where she speaks with Batman

Disorder

What a shame. Hoped she would speak with Batman this chapter given last chapters revelations. I'm curious now, will Taylor regain full control of her bugs again sooner or later like on Earth Bet, or will she never have full, constant, control again? I'm hoping for the latter since it takes away the consequence of getting shot in the head. Anyway, given the title of this chapter, I'm thinking that despite getting more info, Taylor and Robin's crusade will come to an end as there are too many targets for them too handle on their own. They'll need back up if they want to end Ra's plans once and for all.


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