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CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT - JACK

🕑 Added 2024-12-19 08:56:40 +0000 UTC

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OnAHiatus

Good thinking. Thanks

Sean Reed

Perhaps due an interlude where you focus in on say Triumph, Armsmaster Or Miss Militia to explain that.might help with the confusion for some people.

OnAHiatus

I didn't explain it well, I guess, due to the chapter being from the POV of a villain, but Superman is keeping all attention on him as the rest of the heroes deal with the consequences of the Nine’s presence

Kyle Pemberton

Why would Superman stand around and monologue when lives are at stake?


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