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CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT: BLOOD IN THE WATER

🕑 Added 2025-03-04 15:51:26 +0000 UTC

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OnAHiatus

Yeah, you are right. Just wanted to use popular examples of “realistic” superheroes

Disorder

Forgot to mention this but comparing Superman with Homelander and Omni-Man isn't right. Their motivations for being heroes don't involve them helping people for the greater good. One was there to conquer while the other just wanted the attention. Omni-Mans son, Mark, is a better choice for comparison.

OnAHiatus

I'll try to work that in and make it a more introspective chapter. Thanks again for reminding me

Disorder

I'm hoping Batman or one of his partners is there so that Taylor can see that despite them being just as angry as her, they still choose to treat their enemies humanely.

OnAHiatus

Actually, no. Thanks for pointing that out. I meant to write a chapter that showcased just how devastating the war is and maybe explain why Taylor is back to her ruthless self, but I completely forgot. I might have to add it later in the story, maybe when they finally confront the Calculator.

Disorder

Heroism isn't an easy thing, especially in a world (or city) that's gone mad. Thing is, if you make too many compromises, than how can you expect to lead people into a better future if you yourself are simply okay with mediocrity. By the way OnAHiatus, this chapters title got me wondering, has Taylor seen any dead people during this gang war. Feel like she hasn't experienced a lot of bloodshed despite this gang war going on for quite some time.

OnAHiatus

In some ways, having a childish ideal that keeps them from becoming monsters makes DC Heroes more heroic than Worm Heroes. They are willing to do good, regardless of the personal cost or gain. That's why I will always pick Superman over more gritty, “realistic” heroes like Homelander and Omni-man, or even Taylor. Being good is more difficult than being bad

Disorder

Taylor's old friends more or less went along with what Taylor did, also being people that had a flexible moral code. The heroes in Gotham, not so much. Once Taylor interacts with these guys, she'll realize that while these guys are more free than the PRT heroes - who had to follow endless and pointless rules in her eyes - they restrict themselves by following a childish ideal. Perhaps it is, but as Batman once put it in that film, Under the Red Hood, a code is necessary for them, otherwise they may become the very monsters they fight against. Much to Taylor's internal shock, that's exactly what she was becoming as a warlord and what she became in the end as Khepri.

OnAHiatus

Spoiler isn't Lisa. She doesn't jive with actions like that, especially one that is unnecessary. She will definitely talk to Taylor about it

Disorder

They got the location, now it's time to see if this is a mission that will or will not need more than two heroes to deal with it. Its likely going to need more than two heroes, and Spoiler will make the call. She also saw how ruthless Taylor can be, not caring whether or not that assasin will live or die. Batman would never do such a thing, and he's made it clear to all his kids that they should never leave people in positions like that. Spoiler may bring this up to Taylor. Meanwhile, behind the scenes, one of Ra's men is following the pair, focusing mainly on Taylor. While they've seen better, what's important is her will to move forward, that is what has Ra's attention. People who are willing to do anything for their goal are useful assets for the demons head. All he needs to know now is how flexible Taylor's morality is and if she can be made to join his side.


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