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INTERLUDE: RESOLVE

🕑 Added 2025-03-29 08:57:55 +0000 UTC

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OnAHiatus

Thankssss. I had to take some creative liberties to make what I have in mind work, so while I’ll try my best to adhere to canon, some things will be different.

Bapp

Other than that, looking forward to reading more! Just a heads up though, the Six Eyes (blue eyes) that Taylor has isn't just a sign of her abilities, nor an instinctive ability, but allow the user to see cursed energy to an atomic level. I'm not seeing any signs of Taylor being overstimulated, which was the entire downside of the Six Eyes.

OnAHiatus

That's fair. I'll go through them later and rename appropriately

Bapp

a lot of your interludes aren’t interludes at all, they’re still the main plot of the story and focus on the main character. I think you should rename them.


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