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Ersatz (Part 9)

🕑 Added 2023-06-18 11:50:29 +0000 UTC

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"Ersatz" is a very interesting side story in the DD canon. It's interesting to try to figure out what exactly the rules are here. For a while, I thought, like our trapped humans, that the whole thing might be some variation of the "OMG did you ever happen into the worst of the worst in our culture" like the stories about cults that surgically placed people into women's vaginas to be "rebirthed": terrible, but against society's explicit rules. The 911 discovery, though, clearly refutes that. (Question, though: do the humans' voices sound so little like those of Amazons that the 911 dispatcher can immediately recognize what classification of person they are speaking to?) As to "Unfair," which others have brought up, I have to admit that I too have been seriously missing it. We were spoiled for—literally—years by weekly posts that have now vanished. It's easy to see that you are devoting your time to other works, unlike, say, *me*, who simply stopped contributing to ABDL literature in the middle of two stories. And it may simply be that you have been blocked a bit as to where Clark's sage will go...totally understandable. Having been guilty of it myself, though, I do hope that what we have been seeing (or actually *not* seeing) is not a sign of waning interest on your part in a story that so many of us check patreon for all the time...

Oh gosh, I love seeing the dark side of this world you've created -- it really puts what e.g. Clarke goes through into some kind of perspective. But oh gosh darnit I haaaaate Granny omg. She's so cruel! I wanna see her go down! Then again, apparently so are the cops. Makes me wonder what Littles that become injured doooo...I suspect parallels with 'Merican healthcare in that folks use home remedies and avoid hospitals and trouble otherwise at all costs...Did *NOT* expect 911 blasting a sound over the telephone to cause loss of speech, holy yikes! You've really sold how much the odds are stacked against these characters in this world! Looking forward to seeing if they can push back or if it's downhill the rest of the way. Though...one thing I do wonder is why they would be seeking pulling people from other dimensions anyway? IF this is the same dimension as the other story, I get the impression there are *plenty* of Littles to adopt in other ways...So why would they want to reach out to another dimension/universe entirely?

where's Unfair? :/

Amazing work as ever Pers! I do wonder if we'll end up with them being adopted out, certainly seems like there's no way out for them now

Great chapter! Everyone is wondering so many things and seems like Granny has them right where she wants them. Slowly gonna break them down!

Woah! That's a new one! So then, all the precious babies have tried that to I'm assuming? Which would mean that they came one at a time right? One wouldn't try after seeing what it did to the other, unless they got that desperate perhaps. Or Unle Klownso will get the rest of them. As for the absence of Little's on cable TV, perhaps the truth about Little's and any hints as to where they come from or what they used to be is a truth only adults of this world or privy to? All just my own speculation of course! Great chapter as always :D!! Though I am curious on an unrelated note, will Unfair be continuing?


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