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Gamer Chapter 22

🕑 Added 2023-10-02 12:32:07 +0000 UTC

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Shin

Ahh nothing better than eldritch Horrors in the morning 🀣🀣🀣

PhotoStorm Photography

hope he gets taken by an outer God some how lol

Douglas Karr

Yeah, somehow I don't think someone with a level that low will do very well in such a high level end game location

Jesse

Nice can’t wait for hypno to get fucked up

Azazyel

Yes that's correct and thank you for enjoying the chapter!

Azazyel

The second half about pacing are probably true looking back. But the crossovers are just expie characters. There will be no fate stuff for example besides character appearance.

Mylael

Well, fuck. He's about be in for a rough time. Great Chapter overall, looking forward to more. Question about Grimm Grimoire, I know Mamako and Irisveil, but I've never heard of her. Is she from Sentouin, Hakenshimasu! cause that the only one I found that wasn't a video game.

Vryaer

Hmm feels like the story is getting a bit out there at this point. Way too many crossovers to the point that the world loses coherency. I mostly liked the the crossovers up until the Pendragon ability (except PJO that world takes way too much work and retcons to make sense long term. Though it does introduce the concept of demigods into the world so it's a bit forgivable) but at this point there are too many plot threads left hanging to introduce yet more stuff that feels like it won't ever be expanded upon. Stick to one geographic area please. Pacing is way too fast and seemingly skips what should be crafting/filler/ character interaction scenes which would make the pacing so much better. Probably should have resolved the Japan stuff first too before heading back to USA. A lot of the decisions make little sense given that the MC's abilities encourage him to hunker down in a small area to claim/ fortify it. Also he started with crafting abilities he hasn't expanded upon. Also the reward vs danger seems way too little to be realistic. If death tolls and risks are that high then most wouldn't go or would flee. Overall not my favorite of your works but I still like it and look forward to more.


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