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Upgrades Chapter 99

🕑 Added 2025-01-14 19:33:52 +0000 UTC

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quiler

This situation feels familiar 🤔

RiZan

You say he needs this good streak of fortune but he has been on that for awhile. After leaving Orario he has: Created Tamamo Earned the love of Materia Created the ship girl Sunny Leveled up twice A mother and daughter catgirls joined his familia Made a Empowerment Mask to free slaves and Immunity to Mental effects Got an very expensive magic grimoire Have friendly relations with three Familia in the Asteria, Loki, and Rukk And created many weapons and powerups with him now gaining Dragon Magic these two past battles. He is very much thinking life going his way when all it needs to come crashing down is one bad encounter.

Loves2Spooge

Have finally caught up with the story when I started it a couple of days ago. I enjoyed the twists and turns you've been throwing into the plot but if there was just one consistent issue I see with your chapters, it is the many many SPAG (SPelling And Grammar) errors. They are very numerous and makes me skim particularly rough paragraphs.

Loves2Spooge

Tbf, if he can get Hephy and Hera to raise enough of a stink- the latter through his connections with Eris, Materia and possibly Shenhe- they would be enough of a deterrent, but i agree with most of the rest. He has been getting humbled by monsters and adventurers aplenty in this story. He just so happens to have the perfect toolset to clap them back in the long run. I think he needs this streak of good fortune because the author has written him (and the rest of the cast) into a tough spot, like the Sword of Damocles (Ouranos) hanging over the city's head.

RiZan

As much as I want Jake to get dragussy waifu, I don't think he should win here for three reasons: Firstly to curb his enthusiasm and set a new goal as a motivation to learn how to fight and use what he has. Secondly, Jake tends to have runaway thoughts about things that he is forgetting where he is at. The Zeus Família and others would take the Dragon Girl away from him after looking at her, and he wouldn't be able to do anything. Which comes to... Thirdly he needs to lift everyone else in his party up to help protect himself and make a strong front against any malicious actions towards his Família like gang pressing. TLDR: Jake should wait for Dragon Girl, or he may get NTR'ed by Zeus Bros.

Evilhippy

Jake: "Need that dragussy!"

Hmm is it time

Thanks for the chapter looking forward to more.

Bishop7053

Breed the horni dragon

Wilson

TFTC! Guess to make a true dragon submit, he'll have to do it the old fashioned way. If he did lost and have to retry the trial, would Lansseax remember their previous fights? If so, he should definitely do a "Dormammu, I've come to bargain" joke for the harder bosses!

Dat Man

Beaten into submission classic dragon ways

fatandlagging

Finally some good food


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