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Great Great Asset Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2024-09-16 15:36:14 +0000 UTC

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Wigend

Because he's still in a very dangerous situation? "Here, let me have a deep introspection while zombies are beating on the doors and more special zombies could be coming"

Hmm is it time

Have to be honest here I got through the beginning of the chapter before I just quit sorry but can't read this one I mean Jake didn't even have any character development from his stupidity he was sad for like a minute told himself something so he would feal better about himself then fucked off no deep introspection of himself or his choices he fucked up got help from his sponsor learned nothing and basically invalidated the last couple of chapters to basically (Jake: Oops I messed up...oh well no big deal.) Sorry to come after you like this but I've come to expect great stories from you but this one is just not. It started out great but with the whole vamp/Ada stupiditiy thing happening killed any good feelings sorry.

Nicholas

Love the addition of sekirei. I really liked that series. Good work.


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