Megan Grey
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[Crosswires] P.6 old vs new
🕑 Added 2025-07-17 11:03:02 +0000 UTCpage 6 redraw, the layout of the room is a bit better in the old one just for this scene but whateverrrrr
![[Crosswires] P.6 old vs new](https://img10.patrefans.com/storage/11/rz/ko/563145-019e8d85-48ab-7a18-a30d-8abd021e0ea8.jpg)
Comments
Megan
dw there's spice coming up lmao
ChesterSnap
Boo! Less fan service in the new one. Boo, I say! No, in all seriousness, though, the new one looks fantastic. I like the changes to the dialogue, too. It flows better
Megan
i know that was my thought too. idk maybe i should switch them and try just make it like a continuation of the sentence
Nyx Covault
new page looks fantastic! small thing, I read the text in the second panel out of order. the second text box lines up with the text in the first panel making it feel more natural to read those side by side, if that makes sense. but given the placement of the watches in the frame thats also the best place for the text to go 🤷♂️
