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Progress Update - Episode 5
🕑 Added 2020-09-29 09:46:02 +0000 UTC
Giving myself a little bit more time this episode to write the story. Sometimes I don't know if some scenes should be longer, but then again, why lengthen it when everything is said already during the scene. And lengthen it with what? Chitchat? I have to think about it what to do in certain situations.
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Lezromancer
Depends on what you mean with chit-chat, It's not like most conversations are straight to the point. Do what ever feels natural, I suppose. I would probably extend the sex-scenes some, I can imagine it being cringe as fuck writing them, but they seem a bit rushed.
Julian Harper
I can believe that writing is the hardest part, not just what the characters say to one another but to keep it interesting and fresh. So far you’ve done a great job though
