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Gun & Bullet 完结撒花~

🕑 Added 2022-06-25 07:01:12 +0000 UTC

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kumqwat88

Is this comic no longer available?

话说想看超能战队黑龙的后续，那种从骨到皮，从魂到身透出的那股子淫荡，真是让我射了一次又一次

哇哦哇哦，我超喜欢老师的作品！

David

even though the ending was a little sad, it was super fun and kinky! :D <3

開篇很吸引人結局很刺激但是看完感覺中間過程有點平像是在看故事大綱部分內容沒有展開就迎來了結局

這次作品我覺的省略的有點多，沒有體會到作者的創意感，尚有些可惜, 如果補完中間的過程我會更喜歡

个人预期更加偏向于调教的过程，但是作品讲的是狗狗的终结。

RaeRae

I enjoy the story but I felt it was a bit rushed and the hero broke too soon. The ending was nice though, I enjoy it, it keep my imagination running thinking about what would happen next 😊

i really like the Gun & Bullet and how u finishing it. superb

Sanmer

The ending was a bit sad for me.

Hypno

Congratulations on finishing your work If there's anything that's unfortunate It doesn't end up bothering him It's the only way to make him loyal to you I think it would have been better For example, give him a robot arm, a robot leg, Even his brain was turned into a robot If I make him loyal to you forever, It would have been better It's not the end of bullying I think it's your charm to bring a muscular, handsome, honest, cool man to heel to a person who's nothing

怎么说呢？嗯，前面几位的都说过了，没什么要说的。期待新作品吧！但是总感觉，质量不是太高。这边建议先好好想想，有了故事过后再进行创作。或者说先把故事蓝本发出来，听取大家的意见，再根据自己的心声再进行画。不过也有可能有点剧透，至少我是这么想的。再看看大家的意见呗！（英雄之渊不画了真的是有点遗憾）

Y阉割的场面实在是太隐晦了，感觉这里应该是故事的高潮点，但是缺一个正面描写