Patrefans
LDNunes from patreon
LDNunes patreon

Update! [Blood legacies 26/09/25]

🕑 Added 2025-09-27 02:35:00 +0000 UTC

Comments

Blue_Shayde

I liked the update, but I felt things left off oddly when going from MC choked and teary eyed catching Hayden on the balcony, to "What was I thinking? I should go back to the party." It ends on a flirty note with MC's heart aflutter, but they were still hurt by what they saw. Just needs a more bittersweet note in the face of Hayden's amusement and affection. Since MC doesn't fully understand what Hayden is thinking. Course the demo ends there, so maybe there will be more? Or maybe I'm nitpicking. So ignore me if I am. 😅

Nugget

Cogdemos.ink: Cap1-2 line 9478: bad label elia12. Cogdemos.ink: Cap1-2 line 9841: invalid indent, expected at least one 'choice'


More Creators