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Update Rewrite [New era /27/11/25] Ps: Small Update for Blood Legacies soon.
🕑 Added 2025-11-28 01:17:20 +0000 UTCFirst of all, I’m sorry. I’ve been really busy with a few things, but that’s not an excuse for not giving you a heads-up. From now on I’m going to start bringing progress reports so you can stay up to date with everything that’s going on writing and all that.
Speaking of what’s been going on: I was literally very busy these last few days and, especially the day before yesterday, I had to work cutting grass and getting feed for the animals here. Basically the whole morning and afternoon. The little free time I had was used to eat and fix the code errors in the demo.
And speaking of the demo, after translting it into English and fixing the spacing errors, I almost thought I was going to have to redo the entire demo after running randomtest. It kept saying there was an error because there was no fake_choice and that there were choices without finish. I thought I’d have to add finish/goto to every single option and be forced to use the *choice command, but luckily I tested it normally without using randomtest and saw that everything still worked just fine without needing finish and *choice. For anyone who doesn’t know, *fake_choice works as a choice command, but unlike *choice, fake_choice doesn’t need finish/goto every time you make an option, which is great, because I don’t have to do all that work adding finishes and breaking my head with bugs related to it.
Note: No, *fake_choice is not an “empty choice” or "false choice" command, it’s just extremely useful for writing and coding without having to use *choice and *finish every single time. Ok?
Anyway, the demo is here! I hope you like it. It’s a bit short, but I think you’ll enjoy it and what I’ll bring next. Suggestions, constructive criticism and more are always welcome ❤️👀 I love hearing/reading what you have to say about what you like, what you think could be improved, and more.
The Blood Legacies update is also coming this week – a short one, but it’s coming. [I was going to bring it today, but I couldn’t manage to translate and fix errors right now.] And later I’ll look into the new tiers. I didn’t add them this month exactly because I’ve been very busy with things at home, but I think in December I’ll have more free time, since the feed bags for the animals have already been brought and I’ve already re-bagged them. So now it’s just a matter of giving it to them throughout the day, taking care of them and dealing with some day-to-day things, but nothing too heavy. I should have a good amount of free time to write and read ✏️✏️❤️👀
Anyway, thank you all for your patience and support! Enjoy! ❤️
PS: I’m still properly working on the stats section. So it’s not complete yet, ok.
⚠️Strong scenes in the demo, such as blood, violence, and more. Please be aware.
Word count: 17,385.
Comments
ldn
Trying not to give away any spoilers, but yes, the fact that Riley has a gift will help with Alice. And yes, let's just say that she will still offer the deal to the MC, for certain reasons that will be revealed gradually.
ldn
I'm glad to hear that 😁 I hope the rest of the demo will continue to be better than the original demo. Regarding the flashbacks, I'll see what I can do about that to improve it in the next update. Thank you for your feedback.
Zach Sellers
I have a question. Does us turning another vampire so young and them having a power help us with Alice. And how does that affect our agreement with Alice about her getting us other powers if thats still happening?
Slicc
I’ve finished your demo in 1 play through. Haven’t tried every choice yet though but my first thoughts are this is a strong introduction to your story. Having a strong impactful choice at the start is great and makes the WIP memorable. Character introductions are also are another strength of this demo. The flashback sections feel a little weak not in quality but in clarity. So far everything is an improvement of the first demos intro. Keeps the reader engaged with the story.
