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Honks one-shot #2 (no smut): Knockturn Alley Stories

🕑 Added 2024-08-31 12:41:10 +0000 UTC

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Handyandy

Actually, on reflectoon it might serve to show how uncool and not hip Tonks is if you keep it as is? If that sounds like a good angle for this you could keep it

Handyandy

I think it'll work if you just cut it, but here's some alternatives "She shot him looks here and there as the young man cut a rug." As the young man moved to the beat As the young man danced like he just didn't care [this one even rhymes] As the young man swayed and gyrated on the dance floor As the young man was mesmerizing/mesmerized her

Lurk

Yeah I really wanted to change that on review but couldnt come up with anything so left it. I'll probably edit it out when it gets posted on ao3

Handyandy

"Cut a rug"? Lmao is Tonks 80 years old


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