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pg 24

🕑 Added 2016-10-19 18:38:50 +0000 UTC

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Kaden

AHH MARS UR SO WELCOME I really love to be shown who a character is over just... told... and Mitch and Jo SHOW SO MUCH even their body language and the panels where you drew like, a single expression, are so telling... I've like physically reacted to almost every page with a gasp, or laughter, so don't u worry UR DOIN' SO GOOD!!

Mars

AHH GOSH KADEN ;__; thank you so much ....i dont rly ever get complimented on my writing and i always worried my dialog was Bad so that means a lot hahaha.... i think its easier to portray exactly how they feel and think when ur like. as obsessed with them as i am...theyre definitely the most developed ocs ive ever had i know their minds inside n out.... IM SO GLAD ITS SHOWING THRU!! weh

A Strange One

Joey activated "Oh No He Didn't" face.

Kaden

I legit read this page like 3x at work today HAHA. OMG. MITCH. I love. Mitch. Like. You know what's super interesting? Mitch is like, this super tough dude, right? But... His words and actions make his feelings really apparent. Mitch puts his arm around Joey. He refers to Joey as "Honor Student". He assumes Joey comes from a perfect family. So we can infer that Mitch... Thinks of Joey as cute, smart, and good. Even with his ruffboy exterior, even through him antagonizing Jo, his feelings are clear as day and I'm not even sure he's aware of them yet. Mars your art is so, so fantastic but I want you to know that your writing is also really top notch. I usually like to leave silly reaction comments because I'm always like AUDIBLE GASP JOEY FELL OH NO but really- who they are shines through soooo well without having to explain it to the audience and it just hit me with this page like. You have good sons. U raised them right. Thank u for sharing these Good Boys I can't stop being excited for every single new page.