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🕑 Added 2016-10-28 23:50:54 +0000 UTC

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Mars

good idea!!

A Strange One

Shoot, if ur going that route, take a class from prof. Umbridge of Harry Potter, or Agatha trunchbull of Matilda. Great examples of the overly righteous douches that everyone loves to hate.

Mars

NO DUDE this is actually super helpful!! i did have them written as more outright mean and obnoxious but maybe it'll be more effective in the long run to tone it down.. ill see if i can swing it. thank u!

Kaden

LMAO You fuckin' nailed that awful trump lip curl... If only his skin were orange hahaha. In regards to feedback for "making them look more punchable" and "getting the readers to really hate them": I think MitJo are already super likeable, so anyone who is awful toward them the audience will probs auto-dislike. If you wanna dig deeper tho, the worst most unlikeable people in my life as a gay person growing up weren't the ones who were outright mean. The "obviously bad" ones were easy to roll my eyes at or shrug off. It was the self-righteous white boys (and girls) who fancied themselves good people, the ones everyone really admired, who could get away with saying The Worst things that made you question your existance and self worth. And everyone around you, including teachers, would let it keep happening because they didn't recognize that sort of behavior as homophobia or bullying. (kind of like how a lot of white ppl don't recognize racism outside of obvious slurs) I guess what I'm saying is, we're already on Team Mitjo, so getting us to dislike Team Prep won't be hard. Getting us to HATE them tho will probs have a lot less to do with their designs and more to do with how you write 'em! ANYWAY LOL SORRY FOR UBER LONG REPLY HAHA maybe it will help inspire u but if not feel free to disregard!! I'm super excited for whatever you come up with and all of these designs are already visually interesting ahhh * u *