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🕑 Added 2018-06-18 23:57:10 +0000 UTC I did speech a little different, having character's speak with the colors that are the same as their natural eye color, and writing out their words manually than to type it up. Let me know what you guys think.
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Oh yeah thanks, I just didn't want to cover up the character with the writing since they are the focus, so I'll use the backspace when I can as long as it fits the story.
Allan Meyer
Oh for example in panel 3 and 4 where there are more than two lines of lettering, perhaps a hair more space between the lines. BUT I am liking the unique style of the lettering, which is readable and has personality.
Can you give me an example so I may understand better? I just wrote how I normally do in real life, though it is somewhat hard because I had to rewrite some letters a few times cause still not used to my tablet. I'm glad you are giving me some criticism cause it does help me a lot to understand what I can do to improve.
Allan Meyer
Considering the steaminess of the page, the last thing I'm worrying about is the lettering. Really the only thing I can see with the lettering is the lines of text might be fractionally further apart (?).
Farel The Giraffe
Oh I see, interesting :)
Actually when they aren't in the speech bubbles it's supposed to represent self-thinking.
Farel The Giraffe
Huh, no speech bubbles... intruiging!
