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🕑 Added 2019-02-06 02:20:55 +0000 UTCIf your interested in helping me proof-read my scripts and give feedback and help with suggestions to make Decisive Desire great let me know. Spoilers in the script of course but you don't have to if you don't want to, also you'll need the Discord link to Decisive Desire to mingle with the other proofers so we have a private place to chat about stuff when I'm able to! Thanks again! The sooner this is proofed and green lighted the sooner I can get those comic pages started! ^^
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It can be both if I miss something or if it can be better with different dialogue, and I mostly am looking for feedback on flow of the story and stuff, like if things are too boring or whatnot. Are you interested in helping? If you are send me a private message on here with your email and I'll send you the script that way and give you the proper title on Discord! Any feedback helps, just know this isn't written to be published like a normal book, it's to help me get a good flow before I work on the thumbnails for the pages. I know I have 38 pages typed out for the prologue from my 14 pages written, though I think it being drawn out might be around 80-120 pages, I'm not sure, we will see.
Allan Meyer
Are we looking strictly for misspelled dialogue or more general commentary on the flow of the story?
