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Sunshine Love v0.0.1b Now Available!

🕑 Added 2020-04-04 20:01:00 +0000 UTC

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AWB13

I'll chime in too. Great start. Liked the intro story, it's nice to get some background into how the characters came to be. I enjoyed the user interface too, such as having the tablet to keep track of things. I didn't really use the hotel task tracker or whatever it's called yet, but I realize that will probably come into play more as the story progresses. I enjoyed the references to points of interest and characters of other games. It's nice seeing those tie ins and hopefully we'll get to see some of the older characters make some guest appearances, not just the side ones.

HearszAM

Okay, yes I didn't read that part properly. So basically he just wants the option to shut it off this option (the donuts) the same as you can with the Peeping Tom feature? We'll see what we can do. Thanks for the clarification Badger66. HearszAM

Badger66

Hey HearszAM, I think you misunderstood what Bigjake893 was saying. He was not talking about the sounds that Doughnut and Peeping Tom modes make. He was wanting a way to turn off Doughnut mode entirely, just like you can with Peeping Tom mode. Not the sounds but the presence of the doughnuts themselves. He knows he will miss out on the extra pictures, if this were an option, but that way he can focus on the story rather than constantly looking for donuts in every image. If this is not an option, then all I can say to you Bigjake893 is to do what I have done. Play through the whole story ignoring the doughnuts so that you don't break the immersion. They are not usually as in your face as the Peeping Tom markers. Then when you are finished enjoying the story, you can always play through again looking for all of them if you so desire. That way you are able to enjoy the story the first time without the distractions. I know it's not ideal, but that is the only way I can see doing it with the game as it is.

HearszAM

Hi Bigjake893, I take it you haven't seen MrDots' post on here yesterday? He has made some adjustments and fixed some problems in the first release and there is now a mute button for the donut and the peeping tom sounds. Muting either of these options will not affect the other sound effects in the game. The links to upload the game with these new options are in the post titled "Sunshine Love v0.0.1b". Have a great day, HearszAM.

Dante Espinoza

Thanks

Bigjake893

Hi, MrDots, I just want to tell you some personal considerations about this new game/visual novel. There are two things that I really didn't like: the "Peeping Tom Mode" and the "Hidden Doughnuts" feature. About the "Peeping Tom Mode": I've found it quite stupid (sorry, but I really think it is!); in fact, after I used it for the first time (just to see how it works) I immediately switched it off (and that's good you can do it!!). I liked more what you did for Melody, just a gallery pictures to enjoy outside the story. And that brings me to the other "problem". And this is worse than the previous one because you can't disable it!! Just because you know there are these "donuts" here and there, your mind (or at least, my mind) try to look for them in every image, and I've found it quite annoying, and, because of it, I couldn't follow the story the way I did with your previous games, because I continuously forced myself to concentrate on the story instead of looking for a donut!! I mean, it's like when you see a black spot on a white wall; you always try to look at it even if you don't want to!! I think this kind of feature works quite well in a sandbox game (different concept of game), but I'm not sure it does when it comes to a visual novel (or at least for me, it doesn't!). So, question: is it possible to add a button to switch it off like you've done for the "Peeping Tom Mode"? Sorry if I seemed harsh, but I really like your games/visual novels, and I really don't like these two new features. Sorry, again.

Bruce

old save probably wont work due to changes in the games text and renders due to update

Matthew

I downloaded the update and tried to load my save file. I get an error saying an exception has occurred. What do I do?

Jeff Steel

I’m a Vargas man.

Jeff Steel

Some great points

HearszAM

We're looking at early-June, but we will confirm the release date early next month.

Ian Stewart

Now you've got me thinking that "The Boss" is modeled after Spurs chairman Daniel Levy. It might just be that he's a baldheaded douche combined with the Spurs/Arsenal references . . .

Adolfo

Brillante, like always. I love Gil Elvgreen too

Dante Espinoza

When is the next update

Foley

Maybe you can add a bright background to the textarea. I find it hard to read especially in front of the clothing from the old asian guy and Mr Gascoigne. An there ist a small "mr" (instead of a Mr) in the dialoge from Rosa at the first visit with ash and the daughter. Thanks so far, i like it!

Koskesh

It’s difficult for me to word my impressions after the first release, without sounding extremely harsh. Admittedly, I have only played up to the choice of whether to figure it out or leave, but the fact I felt “leave town” was the natural option, I think says something. I actually hoped that would take me to an end screen telling me I’m a moppet for making a choice that ends the game. Now, I realize what I wrote probably sounds very weird, but for me, it boils down to that I never cared for “childhood friend”, and therefore I thought MC’s decisions didn’t make sense. Throughout the backstory, we constantly see him being annoyed by CF, and he seems to be genuinely indifferent towards her. If anything, I’d say that he seems to think she is bothersome. Like “Why are you in my room? Why must you come in here? Why must you tell me about your stupid fish bowl? I couldn’t care less”. Then, for some reason, he kisses her when she leaves, as if he has loved her all this time. This is the first decision I feel was out of line. She leaves, and they do not hear from each other for 10 years. If you truly love someone, this wouldn’t matter of course, but when circumstances are as described, it doesn’t make sense that he seems extremely eager to talk to her and help her out, almost without hesitation. 10 years changes a person, so if they would meet up and finally enter a normal, healthy friendship, it would be fine. But he travels all across the country to help her, with the only concern being Nicole. That also seems quite rash and a large turn in character. And finally, when he finds out she has actively deceived him to get his favour, he STILL (even if I choose against it) decides to help her. Why? She has annoyed you, you have not talked to her for 10 years and now she has lied to you. That’s not a solid start for a relationship. And even though the circumstances are as they are, he thinks very positively of everyone, as if there are almost no issues. I feel a lot could have been gained if we saw some moments of them bonding during the time they grew up. Just a couple of times where they really had each other’s backs, and maybe also that they had sporadic contact over the last few years. That would have made me think that they are not best buddies, so it’s not a given choice to travel all that way for her, but they have always looked out for each other when it was required. Then he can have a little tantrum when she deceives him, but they sort it out. Maybe some other character tells him sharply that some things you must do even if you’re upset, and pleads for him to do the right thing. Their relationships grows and he realizes she has matured in to a very attractive woman and things evolve from there. I don’t know if what I’m saying makes sense. I tried to be as objective as I could, and give some constructive points towards the end. The game is no way bad, in fact, it’s probably pretty good, I just found myself to not be as immersed as in your previous games, largely due to CF and MC’s decisions. You are still fantastic developers and I have the utmost respect for you and your work. For me, this first release just wasn’t a home run, but I am still certain you will make this game a great success.

HearszAM

There will be an explanation for this Bruce in a future release. It's not bad storytelling when not everything has been explained yet ;)

Jeff Sandau

Maybe keep the spoilers to a minimum, Bruce? If you have complaints, a message to the dev would be better than spoilers.

Al

It's hard to believe this is a game's initial release.. holy shit, have you guys knocked it out of the park yet again. Two cheers to you and your team. Thank you for not only delivering an outstanding product, but also for doing so on a regular basis. This is why you'll continue to see support from me, time and again. Thank you.

Ian Stewart

you're forever blowing fixtures

Jeff Steel

He probably pled out to sexual assault - in DMD I think it was opined he would get less than a year. In California on a first time offense he would get 2 years, probably, and do 80-85% on that before released in good behavior. Either way (months or two years), SL starts several years after his initial incarceration, but he is probably still on parole. (He’s totally rehabilitated, though.)

Ian Stewart

Loved the Mourinho dig. It was (cue SpecialOne TV voice) fantastic.

Jamie Marinoff

Anyone having issues with the Android version?It seems when there's a sex scene you read the dialog but the screen is black.

Bruce

seems far fetched lucas is out of prison after he went to jail for attempted rape in dmd bad story telling

Jeff Sandau

Love it so far, hate the cliffhanger you left this version on...

Andrew Smith

Brilliant I loved it Your hard work shows the quality is excellent. In my opinion your place at the top of this genre continues .

Bruce

westham ,i was blowing bubbles tiny bubbles in the air westham

Jeff Steel

Damn non-American Football fans!

Jeff Steel

Just kidding. I tried to get in the Navy as a JAG, but at the time they were only letting in about 6 per year who were not prior Navy - they were farming their JAGs from within. No, I’m not bitter. Not at all.

Jeff Steel

To the tune of “A Hymn to Him Lyrics” Why can't a Sailor be more like a Airman? airmen are so honest, so thoroughly square; Eternally noble, historic'ly fair; Who, when you win, will always give your back a pat. Well, why can't a Sailor be like that? Why can't a Sailor be more like a Airman? Airmen are so decent, such regular chaps. Ready to help you through any mishaps. Ready to buck you up whenever you are glum. Why can't a Sailor be a chum?

Jeff Steel

Will do, but, to put it in the terms of professor Higgins from My Fair Lady (note I am prior active duty Air Force):

HearszAM

Yeah that would be me. Dots thought it would be funny to put that in there without telling me (bastard, haha), and didn't even tell me that the boss (Mr. Gascoigne) would have a Spurs mug. Did you like the subtle dig at Mourinho I put in there? ;)

DaneJerrus

Fantastic work, as always!

AceAssassinValley

I love the game so far hate the way it ended gonna drive me crazy waiting to see what happens and btw when i played through at the airport sceen i had a random 1 show um in middle of dialogue and then when i talk to ashley mcs name randomly pop up in middle of dialogue

Jerimy O'Mary

Disregard, I downloaded the wrong version

Jerimy O'Mary

Just a note, on the android version, there is no animation. Other than that, great first release! The navy enlisted thing was already well covered, lol.

Jeff Sandau

So excited to play this! Downloading it now. As a huge fan of your other two games, I'm looking forward to enjoying this as much as the others.

cremefraiche7

Also just saw the cunt boss has a Spuds mug, this is pure gold!

cremefraiche7

Is one of the Devs a Gooner? I had a chuckle when I saw the Arsenal FC mug in the breakfast scene. Love it!

HearszAM

Cheers Bruce, thanks for the feedback

Bruce

U.S.Navy calls them sailors ,seaman is a rank e-3

HearszAM

The dialogue will be easy to change. The outfits and any alterations may take a bit more time.

Bruce

sailors are not junior officers they are enlisted men.and going ashore is called liberty so departure time is liberty call and normally the ship does not book rooms on shore the crew live on the ship and visit ports of call.am a navy man so just giving input that maybee youcould correct befornext update

Hamish

Hello Hearsz - I haven't got into the game much yet, but I was also taken aback by the junior ranks being called 'officers'. It might be difficult to address all the details Sural has identified (many of which seem to be US-specific, e.g. National Defense Ribbon), but a hopefully easy revision for next release could be changing 'officer' to 'sailor' (or US-preferred 'seaman') when referring to the junior ratings. Looking forward to all else, though ).

HearszAM

Thanks for the feedback Sural. We'll see what we can do but the info you've given is certainly helpful, not to mention good education for us all. I don't see us having any other scenes like this one at the beginning so hopefully, we can fix the issues that you have listed. We'll see what we can do. Aside from this, did you enjoy the first version of SL?

Sural Argonus

First off...The Service Dress Blues and the Service Dress Whites...Would never be worn at the same time. They are seasonal uniforms. Pick one or the other. Also junior enlisted aren't referred to as Officers. They are usually Seamen. If you want to make them Petty Officers, there are lots of rating badges you can use as well. Also...Enlisted and Officers would NEVER frat on liberty. It's against the regs. Even senior enlisted wouldn't. There's total segregation with the ranks. OH...Almost forgot...I would have to go back and see how you guys worded it...but Liberty is usually assigned by Duty Section, not by ranks. I can't complain about the uniform for Lt. Gerald, because I have yet to see ANY good Naval Officer uniforms. Even if they had the British style. However...a standard black suit could be done. You could edit/create a texture to put the LT Stripes on (Lieutenant, or O-3..Same rank as your Captain in the Air Force) I think I saw some coveralls that would work for Navy Coveralls...We generally didn't wear our dress blues/whites unless we were on watch. They do have a Dungarees outfit for DAZ...It's called Universal Sailor and it's on Renderocity. Also usually for Liberty Ports...Junior Sailors would wear the dress uniform, but that's up to the Captain's discretion. If you want help (not asking for any compensation, so don't worry) I will be glad to offer it. I can't think of anything else right now, but if you want to look at the uniform modifications I made (never finished them tho) That uniform, if it's the same one I used for a personal project I made for myself, I can give a little help with modifying it. (The Service Dress Whites are ugly in that set, by the way. hehe I suggest sticking with the blues) I used a website to add ribbons, which is what we'd wear on the blues. If they are fresh boots, they'd at least have the National Defense Ribbon.

Jeff Steel

Please do as I’m Air Force and I’m sure we’ve stumbled around on this. Hopefully we didn’t screw up too much.

Sural Argonus

Mr Dots...I really love the work you and your team do. However, I just can't let this slide. I have only gotten a couple minutes in and I would like to talk to you about some things regarding the beginning with the sailors. I was in the US Navy, and I would like to give some feedback if you wouldn't mind. All constructive, I promise. :D

Yoyinmi

good luck with the game

A Nay

Damm you MrDots!! ;) It's 10PM local time for me and my alarm goes off at 6:00 but thanks to you I won't be getting any sleep for a few hours to come and I will be wasted behind the wheel tomorrow.

CamazotzTyr

*slams that download button* and here we goooooo!


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