Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Update (March 31st 2017)
🕑 Added 2017-03-31 20:03:26 +0000 UTC Well my excited readers, I have been working on the story and it is getting intense. Really enjoying this one so I thought I would give you a quick update.Tweaked a few things with the build up that I wasn't too pleased with which now read much hotter. Removed some unneeded sentences throughout though there is a lot more editing that will need doing at a later stage. Still, the feel of the story is there now.
I have also made a couple of larger changes which have significantly improved the flow - and the erotic heat - of the story. I still have a lot to write but the first sex scene is well under way now. This sex scene is the largest in the story (as usual) and so will take the most time, but it is also the most important. After this there is another sizeable scene and a smaller sex scene with some story scenes between. Then only the outro of the story.
As you can see there is a lot to still write and I have toyed with the idea of splitting the story into two chapters (one ending after the first sex scene and another after the other two). But after seeing how Valestock looked I have decided against that. The story will be much longer than normal stories because of this, but everything will flow better. So the story will be much better off for it in the long run.
I am also writing a disclaimer for this story. I always receive complaints about the length of the story, repetition, and the fact that a woman is cheating without something bad happening to her. As you can imagine, after 12 years it becomes more than boring to go through these messages, and as this story will be longer, and much slower in pace, I feel a disclaimer can only help minimise this for me.
Finally, when the story gets a little closer to done I was toying with the idea of taking a couple of sentences, or a paragraph, here and there and posting them for Patrons as teasers. They would be taken out of context and marked in the title as potential 'spoilers' (though I would try to choose parts of the story that would not give much away if possible), but they would give you some glimpse into the story. Previews have been requested and this is the best I can think of that will give you a hint without too much. I will not reveal the story in large chunks until it is submitted. So, let me know what you think and I will take the majority opinion on board.
Much more to come, and as always - you know how to contact me.
~Shadow~
