Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Story - The Distraction PDF
🕑 Added 2021-04-24 20:28:49 +0000 UTCAs promised here is the PDF version of the new story, The Distraction, for those of you who want to enjoy without clicking through pages on Lit.
Enjoy!
~Shadow~
Comments
I'm glad you enjoyed it. The end I wasn't too happy with but it felt right. As for the rest, it was just a hard story to write so I guess I don't see it from the readers' perspective, so I don't see anything but the strain. Again, glad you enjoyed it though.
I liked the different angle you took, with her in the driver's seat as the corrupter. I always enjoy when you have the boyfriend/fiance/husband put them in the situation and inadvertently encourage the cheating. This had some believability issues and an abrupt end, but was a very fine story -- you undersold it!
