Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Answering a Question
🕑 Added 2017-11-14 00:16:13 +0000 UTC Ok, so I have been asked why I say that this story is different from other stories I have written, and why that means it is taking longer to write.In answer, you can think of my stories as stories I tell of what happens and how a faithful, unattainable woman ends up cheating. This new story is, obviously, that. However this story isn't so much me describing the story as it is experiencing her first cheating moment with her. This story is much more detailed in her feelings and each step she takes along the way because it isn't so focused on what happens to lead her to cheat, but rather her thoughts lead to events that lead to more thoughts, and so the spiral to cheating occurs. The story is about exploring her first moment of cheating and how she feels each step of the way in that experience, and how that inner focus leads her to enjoy the cheating and cheat more after.
So this story is much slower in pace, longer in description, much more detailed and explores much more of how she feels and how every individual thing that happens affects her. So, for example, the very first moment a guy who is not her boyfriend enters her. In my other stories this is a sentence or two. A few at most. In this story several pages explore it for her - including the feeling of how it feels for her to feel his dick entering her, moving inside her knowing he is not her guy, looking into his eyes as he enters her, the sensation of loosening for him, the difference in how his cock feels, sensations and thoughts she has, and so on. And the entire sex scenes are like that.
Just to give you some idea, the very first sex scene itself will likely be longer than the entirety of HP. But to clarify, the very first time they have sex is the longest, because of this exploration, whereas those after will explore things like different positions and places and what this does internally to her, but will - because she has cheated once before - be quicker (though still long).
So the new story is not reading about the journey she takes, but seeing her take that journey and going along with her. If that makes it any clearer? This means that there is so much more description and so much more to write. Where in other stories there were five pages dedicated to one sexual position, here there may be forty or fifty. I have, in fact, had to email Literotica to make sure that they are ok with me submitting the story in full as it is likely to be around 400/500 pages in Word and probably around 300,000 words.
Imagine, then, if you will how long that takes to write. Not only do I have work and life, not only am I trying to write something new, but if - when you read my stories - you find the dialogue and build up hot, and find it hard not to cum at least once, then imagine how hard (pun intended) it is to write that and stay focused enough to keep writing. Then imagine doing that for a story several times longer and more detailed than any story I have written before.
When I say I am desperate to finish this story, I mean it. When I can I write for 8 hours a day or more. And I do not want to write another story this long again, nor in this way. I really, really want to write something else and something that takes far less out of me. But I need this story done first. Whether it will work or people will like it, I have no idea. But it was something I wanted to write.
Hope that clears up the questions? And for others I hope that makes it clear why the % takes so long to move and why despite me setting schedules they keep getting pushed back.
All I can say is that while no schedule is set in stone now, I am writing every day and I *will* have this story completed before long. There will never again be a wait of months or years after this. My aim is to have a story released every month if I can after this story, and this story will absolutely be released before HP's next birthday. Before the new year and Christmas, is my aim. To have the first write through completed, or mostly completed, by the end of November.
When you finally do get to read it, I hope you understand why it took so long. (And yes, four years I couldn't write properly due to work, so technically they don't count to the writing time of the story)
~Shadow~
