Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Update (25th July 2018) [Edited]
🕑 Added 2018-07-25 10:26:43 +0000 UTC Today has been one of inspiration! And this post may get updated as it is still early.But I have now finished another section and written almost 8 pages, 4700 words! The story is now 57% complete in first draft and fuck that section was hot! Looking forward to getting this new section completed now. This sex scene is very, very long and detailed. There *is* repetition, but I think sex has repetition and when having sex saying certain things you both enjoy is important, and thus repeating them can be hot. But even so it is hot. Fuck, I have no idea if anyone will ever read the whole story or get through the first scene without multiple reading sessions.
Let's just say that there are 'three' individual instances of sex that comprise the 'first sex scene' (i.e. a scene involving sex that isn't separated by narrative where there is no sex). I am still on the first of those. This is the longest given it is the initial cheating and thus her first experience. So to give you an idea: if the first sex scene is 100%, 50% of it is this first instance of sex, with the other two making up the other 50%. I am almost halfway through that first instance now. The end of this section will mark the halfway point in that instance, even though the sections that come after that are shorter than those that came before (like I said before, I turned a corner).
With that in mind be aware that this sex scene is currently 200 pages long, and nowhere near finished. compared to House Party's 37 pages completely finished. The story itself is 327 pages long and still nowhere near done. Compared with House Party's 121 pages all in. So be prepared for a slow building, deeply detailed story. It is *meant* to be this long, because it is all about Mia's journey and experiences about cheating for the first time. So don't go into this story expecting an experience like my other stories (in terms of length and detail), as this thing is immense.
...But Mia likes it huge ;)
So 57% complete. And that took a week to finish that section. A long way to go but we are making (hot) progress.
~Shadow~
Comments
I know exactly how she looks and who inspired me with her. But you are all welcome to create fan art if you wish.
Mr. Palmer
Do you have a picture of what Mia looks like? If not, are you interested in creating an image of her?
