Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Update (13th August 2018)
🕑 Added 2018-08-13 16:38:27 +0000 UTC I haven't had as much time to write today, but 1800 words and almost 3 pages is at least progress. Plus I am now on the final part of this section that I want to write. I had hoped to finish this section today but I had planned for it to be tomorrow so I will be on time with that I think. Looking forward to the end of this one. Fuck this section has been quite long.The story is now currently 417 pages long. So let's say 420 by the time this section ends and that will be about 63% of it. So you're probably talking about 650-700 pages in total. Give or take because some sections are small and others large. The entirety of House Party was 121 pages, for comparison. Just the first sex scene alone in this story is more than twice, maybe three times that. So if we are going with Lit pages, HP was 19, I would guess that roughly this story will be between 100-114 pages on Lit.
Of course, that will likely be reduced because there is a lot of repetition that even I want cut out. The story is so long and has taken so much time that there is bound to be a lot of repeated phrases as I have forgotten what I wrote before and so on. Usually sex scenes are shorter because you don't want to read the same phrases over and again, as sex is very repetitive. But with this story feeling everything as she does and going along with her experience is the whole point of the story. So there will be some measure of repetition. But even with that there is a lot I will likely cut or move about when editing time comes. But I can't imagine the story will be hugely different in size. Maybe a hundred pages or so less. Who knows. The point is, be prepared for this being very long, very slow, and not to be read like my other stories. You experience Mia's journey, you don't just read about it.
~Shadow~
