Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Update (14th August 2018)
🕑 Added 2018-08-14 17:42:57 +0000 UTC 63% written (first draft). 1800 words and 3 pages done today. Not entirely happy with that either but it is getting to the point where there is not much I can write that I haven't already but I need to write something. So that is why it is difficult right now and less words/pages have been written.What I have done is the best I can and I will leave it at that for when the editing comes. Hopefully I will shrink what is there and see how to make it fit better. When you have a sex scene that is well over 200 pages there comes a point where description or dialogue can't be had because everything has been said before. So that is the issue. But considering that I think I have done fine. With editing it down I think it will work better but I can't do that until I get to the editing stage. I am starting to think the story is too long to be interesting at parts. But maybe with the cutting to come that will be fixed.
Anyway, I am on the last section of the first sex act in the first sex scene, so maybe the break after this will be exactly what the story needs. I know I need that break. It should also be a bit quicker after this point.
Basically, I think the story is fine it just needs cutting down and trimming as there is too much repetition and it is too long for what is needed. With that done and the story much tighter there won't be so much strain on dialogue/description. But I need to see that before I can edit it.
This story will definitely have a couple of rounds of editing but it will be a much better story for it. Just trying to write what I want in it for now.
~Shadow~
