Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Update (20th August 2018)
🕑 Added 2018-08-20 07:35:29 +0000 UTC 68% written (first draft). Almost 3100 words and 5 1/2 pages. The story is now 454 pages in Word. My guess is that the next few sections will be about 5 or so pages each, before some bigger sections post the first sex scene.That means that the story should be around 600-650 pages long roughly. The first sex scene ends at 75% and I am about three-quarters of the way through what needs to be written in that sex scene. As noted the main sex in that scene has been finished and what is following is the rest of it. As I normally write in a story, there will be a main, detailed sex session followed by a shorter montage-like scene to fuel the readers' imaginations about what happens after.
As with House Party there will be more than one full sex scene with long description. Though the second (and the very much smaller third) will not be anywhere near as detailed as the first. Remember that the story is all about Mia's *experience* of cheating, and so the very first moment and what it makes her think and feel will always be the most detailed. But each part of each scene I am writing is there for a reason, and that reason is that it serves some part of the intention of the story. It is all about Mia's first cheating experience and how she finds that, what she feels and thinks, what it does to her, how she changes as she goes, and how she finds it different. Each part of the story makes her see that and enjoy it.
I know that is rather vague but I can't really explain without going into the story more than I can pre-release ;) But I hope that makes some sense. If not, well, I know what I am doing and you can always ask for clarification after you've read it.
It's coming along well ;)
~Shadow~
