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Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2022-10-07 04:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Kel

Finally catching up on this story and man what a delightful chapter! Seeing all the dynamics of the group play out and getting to know more about these characters… Even if odds are most of them aren’t going to make it :’) The comment Sarai makes about shaving her legs struck me as odd though. Not sure if that’s intended as a cultural thing, but it’s a pretty recent beauty standard irl. It takes a lot of time and hassle and I was surprised Tristan didn’t think anything of it.

Flaming Cat

This seems like it can be resolved amicably. They have shared interest in getting across the bridge and a better chance in a larger group.


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