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Chapter 44

🕑 Added 2023-05-19 04:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Matthew Flowers

We know the Fisher is older than most gods we’ve been introduced to and is most likely a related to some body of water in Peredur. So I’ll admit it is groundless speculation that they share any history at all. After all we know more about the king of rats than the Almsgiver lore wise. I just have a hunch they will fell the god together perhaps for honor’s sake if nothing else

Spencer

The mirror dancer soliloquy at the end was beautiful.

Spencer

Is the Almsgiver a foe of the Fisher? I don't remember any significant link between Pereduri and Sacromontan gods.

Matthew Flowers

It just occurred to me that Tristan and Angharad might have their eyes set on killing the Almsgiver. We don’t know what the Fisher wants her to accomplish for his freedom but it the only fair price for her contract so far by killing one of his divine foes.

Matthew Flowers

This novel has less plot armor every chapter. The only one you can argue that has it is Angharad, but that’s because we don’t know the cost of her contract yet. It’s unclear to me if she must operate “honorably” due to her contract or personal ethics. I wish we had a list of contracts and the cost for all the characters

Daniel Keogh

Thanks loads for not making Augusto one of those invincible, plot-protected antagonists that survives every encounter despite the fact that he never gives anybody any good reason to save him. <3

General Corteau

I feel like one still has to die — looking at the cover art for Pale Lights I see 6 silhouettes, but there are 7 people in the crew alive right now (Ferranda, Song, Shalini, Angharad, Tristan, Maryam, Zenzele).

Cameron Pryde

What an absolutely fantastic chapter. Very glad I subscribed, what a fantastic note to end on.

Kel

Holy cow the fully fledged Watch members are *scary*. And no surprises since you have to survive all this just be sure you’re good enough raw material! Nice little preview of what our characters could be like given the right training and several years of working together.

Gwennafran

RIP Lan. Died like you lived, trusting nobody to have your back. Only this time, you really should have put trust in your team. Still, I'll miss you.

Teddy

Very nice!


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