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Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2025-05-16 16:00:16 +0000 UTC

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Davis

All of our enemies are so smug; I hate that type, especially when things go their way. Which they obviously will, at the start of our conflict at least. Too bad.

Aguido Horatio Davis

His brother?

Ed

this the difference between izel and the others. all the thirteen have problems back home but they want to return and resolve them, izel had not plan at all, like out sight out of mind, the princess will correct that one way or another.

Mark W

“You hadn’t heard?” Shalini asked, sounding surprised. “Your friend is now Captain Nkosinathi Morcant of the Forty-Ninth Brigade. He already has two cabalists lined up, one of them a first-year Skiritai. Everybody’s been talking about it.” “Yaotl Acatl,” the princess introduced herself. “I was recommended to the Skiritai Guild as well.” Oh good, they're consolidating our first year problems into one brigade so we only have to care about one of the freshman groups. Even reusing the same 'short sighted antagonist group' number, that'll keep things simple. The 13th might be unluckies (to friends and foe) but the 49th is outright damned.

celerity

"The [rumor] where the Unluckies robbed a slaving ship [...] Is it true you freed slaves?" Every Unlucky we've followed since the Docks Incident (Maryam, Song, Angharad) has been laser-focused on immediate damage control, such that nobody has paused to consider the broader political implications. The Thirteenth are almost fully locked-in as 'the firebrand abolitionist brigade' now, in the eyes of the other students. And they have every incentive not to backpedal, given the Orels' precarious position. Angie's remark that they "do not even have to make enemies anymore" is more prescient than she realizes.

Markos El-Far

Join in next time on "Angharad will fuck anything that moves if it has tits"

Aurelian Ungureanu

*bonk* Angie, straight to horny jail! I find the comparison very funny, of our first 2 protagonists: one's thoughts are half the time about lusting over someone with a nice pair of 'charms', while the other is an asexual whose idea of doing something exciting with a stranger's pair of underwear is to use it to deliver poison. On a completely different note, there is something really appealing about seeing the depth of a side character. Thinking of Musa Shange here, who we are first introduced as the typical arrogant noble whose main defense mechanism is self over-estimation. Initially, he is humiliated by Angie in an honor duel after which, he could have simply been cast into the eternal shadows of the background. Instead, it turns out he is part of a good team which he coordinates successfully in the arena, is a sly social fox in the aristocratic environment and one of the main influences in the dynamic power plays of the Skiritai students.


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