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Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2025-05-30 16:00:16 +0000 UTC

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Nathan Fish

"Time had whisked away the second s//of/ the Orrery’s great moons, gold bleeding out of the pale-and-gold light to leave behind a dim glow, dulled." "But in the distance, to the east, the verdant star announcing morning crawled ever s/close/closer/ and with its approach s//that/ the dimness went." "Song forced herself to look to her right, away from the shroud it was her responsibility to s//??/off her little sister’s face." "Dutifully, Song opened the bag and crunched a few s/walnuts/hazelnuts/ with her teeth." “Good s/new/news/,” he happily said. "They had saved ten s/life/lives/ a finger easily, though Song suspected that knowledge would be cold comfort."

Scott's Folly

"Three hundred and twenty-one students had survived to their graduation ceremony. On the back of that success, four hundred and fifty-seven new souls had volunteered for the belly of the beast as the fresh batch." Taking us to 778 students in total. If not for the Lemure attack, I would have expected to lose one anyway, purely on the basis of significant numbers.

Joe Rachman

It turned up in my email. I think EE may have accidentally sent or posted it early. It's really a very good one btw.

alreaper

I got a notification for chapter 12 but there isn't one. Am I hallucinating now?

Patneu

The Skiritai cannot get Ferranda back by killing lemures in the Acallar, because she didn't die in there. Sadly, she stays dead.

Lucas E Burgan

So what is this gonna do to the desire to get folks back via the alcaller and the steel list? How many freshman do you save to get Fernanda back? This mass casualty even has to change the logic around using it. Also who the fuck profits from attempting to kill y2 of the of scholomance? This level of complexity and power feels like something only the watch and state actors could pull off. This looks like an act of war against the watch.

Poop McScoop

Angharad would be useful in Death Hogwarts. Her foreseeing was definitely useful on Isla Muerta, and there are a few captive lemures. Tristan has thrice uncovered ancient secrets (sleep feather, rocks fall chamber, and God killing tutoring.) I do think that it would be interesting to have Tristan with a bunch of Skiritai jarheads that don't respect him, especially if Tupoc is in that group.

PoiDess

Well, they’ll probably put it to a cabal vote. The discussion’s bound to get spicy, but I think they’re bound to split the party. Izel, maryam and song for the library hunt, angharad and tristan for the lemure hunt. The sword and the skulker’s no use in death hogwarts, and will be liabilities vs the aetheric tinker, the navigator, and magic truth eyes

PoiDess

I honestly think tristan would be on board with the library hunt vs the lemure hunt. They’re not a slaying cabal, and odds are forbidden lore would help them hunt and kill the thing anyway. And knowing the unluckies’ luck… the worst case scenario would be the lemure popping up within scholomance anyway

Alex

Did Nerei transform into a Lord of Teeth? A test for the students and a way to rid Tristan of his weakness by removing the god corrupting his soul after his near-sainthood? Who better to eat the divine than a heresiarch, described by Fortuna as "discordant" to gods.

Nicolas

If I really pray hard, I’ll pause reading until January

Nicolas

I really hope I can take a break from the story until like September or something


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