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Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2025-09-26 16:00:20 +0000 UTC

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StartledBranch

“That I’ll do the only thing I still can for her to be alive at the end of this, Izel thought.” This has me thinking he’s either going to return home with her or take his own life.

Sheyaan Bhesania

Well... I truly do not know if we'll see Tristan lose some fingers. As people have mentioned, Errata has done so before with Maryam, tho it seems Navigator's often lose parts of their bodes. Yue has a large burn, those twins had their fingers screwed up, Tupoc's whose name slips my mind at the moment lost her arm, that navigator at book 1 lost his whole arm... and then his life. Seems like Errata doesn't care for making the magic users lose some bits and limbs. But Tristan has put in the work and put himself at grave risk and clearly has a plan, and already lost a tooth. It may be time he finally gets a clean win, he's put in the effort. It feels too early for them to get a clean win, ngl. And it will be interesting either way. He wins, and we see how Yoatl handles it. He loses, he suffers cost and future pain that he can't easily get around which compromises his effectiveness and increases his bitterness toward Song and Maryam for not being there, as well as giving Yoatl an ego boost which may exacberate her growth and her as a problem. And of course, it gives a certain Morcant potentially an idea or opening. If Tristan does lose fingers, I will wonder how Morcant's healing will get involved. You know it will have to be acknowledged at the very least, and I can see some interesting happenings with that. And suffice to say, compliments to Erratic Errata. It is a praiseworthy thing to have written a story where you genuinely can't tell the outcome, especially when potentially permanent bodily harm is on the line. I hate how I have to wait for the next one.

Adam Woods

The explanation of "why everything has skulls on it" was hilarious and adroit world building

Aguido Horatio Davis

“Wants to be a chaotic good murderhobo” is a valid ambition, I suppose. I did not know that Izel’s pacifism extended this far, but it feels like getting his friend to not die will require sacrificing some of it. Ow.


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