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Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2023-09-08 04:01:00 +0000 UTC

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thephilosoft

> crate about five feet long but less than a foot wide and hardly even a foot long. 5ft long 1ft wide 1ft tall I presume? > And that loss was not forced on me, I was a choice **it** was a choice

Orion1024

Love the character development. Thanks !

Joe Rachman

Also the key group dynamic now seems to be the two pairs that don't like each other learn to get along. Angharad and Maryam based on their respective grief over butchered family, seething desire for revenge, etc And Tristan and Song over a mix of love of forward planning, petty acts of revenge, and class warfare... A little pat as a structure but still fun.

A. E.

Maryam: why bring a thief if we're not going to use him. Song: huh, you have a point


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