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Chapter 22

🕑 Added 2023-12-01 22:07:02 +0000 UTC

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Spencer

Should it have been "Greg's Draughts" originally? Removing an apostrophe seems barely to qualify as vandalism.

Colin Love

I guess sometimes you just lose. Looks like the 13th is done for and this time their adversaries have the proper measure of them. The high queens secret service has laid out what seems to be a trap tailored for her. She isn’t helpless or weak but she’s a step behind her classmates when it comes to playing and getting played. She’s also the first person to remove from the board if combined interests we perhaps caught a glimpse of at the hearing are arrayed against the 13th bearing malice and knives. Round one saw the 13th close ranks and stand up to the challenges posed with style. That was a direct attack whom ever is arranging the pieces on the board is more careful.

Tarmandan

Also conveniently forgetting that the main reason all brigades stayed away from the thirteenth was HER doing, antagonising Captain Sebastian. I can't wait for the next couple chapters, I wonder if all of our 4 main characters will have their flaws exposed or just one or two of them.

Cotillion

I can see her point of view, honestly. She feels heavily dragged down by the 13th. Curious to see no mention of her contract, her uncle and the assassins, or the ufudu in her pov chapter though. You’re growing lax, Tredegar… coasting through Skiritai classes with your contract, not taking an elective, jumping straight to the thing you’re best at in Warfare while the rest of the brigade tries to improve. There are a lot of guillotines hanging over her head that just haven’t dropped, the way they have for the rest of the brigade.

Jaz Hare

I had always assumed Song had shot Isabel, but honestly, with Fernanda's name being thrown into the mix, it almost seems TOO easy for Song to be the answer.


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