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Chapter 37

🕑 Added 2024-03-15 04:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Poop McScoop

The whole thing was probably a trap to kill Angharad. She's sent to a dangerous area where she can't use her contract? I bet the queen of Malan stole kingship from the Fisher King, and wants it exterminated now.

Aurelian Ungureanu

"From a Doylist point of view" - thank you for saying that. Thinking about the big picture, asexuality as a price does sound less interesting now. In my defense, I imagined sexual desire in the Vesper world as the next most powerful aether taint after pain and suffering. So, a god having a lifetime's worth of sexual desire seemed like a significant price, somewhat like Francho's - everything he might have written throughout his entire lifetime. Though, Francho's contracted god was the Bibliogast and what I didn't think of until now was that lust is incongruent with Fortuna's Lady of Long Odds (luck) source of power. If she dealt with something sexual, she wouldn't be named Fortuna, but something in relation to that. Regarding my initial theory of Fortuna's presence molding his soul: One of the very interesting things I find about the world of Vesper (EE's writing) is that the psychology of the characters makes so much sense. So I enjoy geeking out on ideas that we could have Tristan experience the dread of being abandoned by Fortuna, the only one who has been with him since he was very young and who is too "terrible at life" to backstab him in a meaningful way ... because it's natural to feel that. And that same dread could also be explained by Vesper's machinations of a young soul adapting to the presence of a god and influencing the person's emotions to match the psychology. So, natural emotions and artificial god influenced emotions - similar results from different causes. But, that's just my mind rambling until I get a new chapter to read.

Markos El-Far

The name hurts Songs eyes to read

C104

Would be interesting if Angharad actually cribbed it, but I am betting on fisher/Maryam interaction to save her ass

Ethan

It brings be so much pleasure reading your books, EE.

Fusckurself

Yo, EE, can we have one double chapter once we’re in Asphodel? Would be sadistic to keep us all clenching after such a beautiful buildup

Jasus

And she is the only one that can not die and leave him behind.

Jasus

I mean she showed mulitple times already that she is swayed by a pretty girl very easily.

Suplely Maple

This doesn't really make sense to me. We've seen a variety of queer characters in this world, it seems much more likely that Tristan is just another. It's unlikely that Angharad's lesbianism is a part of her price, and I can't really see why Tristan would be different. Also I read his deepest fear as stemming more from having relied on her for years after he lost his family and was left alone. Especially given how he doesn't seem to have had any close friends in Sacramonte. A way to show us how much he means to her even if he won't say it.

silvergazer31

Back in Chapter 7 or 8 it was mentioned that, in addition to things looking like you, you could also be possessed. I think thats what happened to Tredegar: something is riding her skin. so she's not stuck in the layer, she simply came back with something extra.

silvergazer31

Ok, theory time. That bird is Maryam's double. Yue said the Entity resembles emotions Maryam rejects or suppresses, but its clearly more then that. She suppressed her worry of Song, the entity shows up to kill her attackers. Back in chapter 35 she suppressed sadness about her home, a Bird shows up and she specifically thought "she always liked feeding the birds." Now all the seeds are gone, she thinks its totally hilarious, and EE does have a habit of hilarious foreshadowing. A Witch did make all the seeds disappear, only it wasn't Maryam but Double-Maryam so technically Tristan/Fortuna aren't wrong. The entity clearly has its own agenda but its also obviously intelligent and cares about Maryam to a degree, its why it worked with her to bring back the boat Tristan was on. I think Yue's plan will let Maryam meet/see/converse with the entity, for at least a moment. and I think it will end up as a sort of Familiar

Michael Meikle

From a Doylist point of view, I *strongly* doubt that Tristan's asexuality is related to his contract -- it would terrible erasure to go "the only reason a guy isn't sexually interested in woman is magical radiation". I'm personally subscribing to the theory that Tristan is a living shrine for Fortuna, somehow.

Michael Meikle

It's going to be very cathartic to see her get knocked down a peg.

Michael Meikle

I like the theory that it's Totec the Feathered.

Aurelian Ungureanu

I am curious about the time we will, hopefully, get more info on the connection between Tristan and Fortuna. My theory is that he started the contract at a young enough age that his soul molded to her presence, maybe with a bit of help from her. I have wondered if his asexuality is related to it, as some form of price? Also, why is he convinced Fortuna is a small god and can't displace. Non-the-less, his soul molded to Fortuna's presence would explain why his worse nightmare seems to be her leaving him - the pressure from the goddess has become like a scaffolding holding his soul in the shape it currently is. If that disappears, his soul could fall apart ... in a non-figurative way?

Aurelian Ungureanu

"I love all of the main characters to the point I even get annoyed at their faults". Same! The psychology behind them makes sense, which makes them feel real. In the blowout after the Scholomance trial, I could feel Song's outburst - she was afraid of Fortuna's near permanent presence without understanding it, so that was a more convenient thing to focus on and blame when shit hit the fan instead of looking at the all the pieces on the board. Tristan's traumas translate to abandonment issues and a heavily avoidant attachment style, which is why it's against his nature to open up and share his thoughts - all the more praise when he begrudgingly does it with Maryam. Maryam with the inferiority complex developed from the tangible risk of becoming a slave or dying like her family and community. Angharad, a well deserved poster child/noble/fighter/etc being typically drunk on the comfort of her successes and finding little reason to understand the world outside of it, until now ofcourse.

COR

I really get the vibe that Tristram is gonna be real special aether wise. He has a goddess constantly drenching him in it, he waltzes into a layer on day one, spends ages there with no ill effects and now uses a layer as a short cut to his god killing classroom.

Osiris

I honestly don’t want Angrahard back on the team. Her thinking is too rigid and it messes with the vibe of the squad. Hopefully this dose of humbleness will finally change her.

Colin Love

Should have known it started off such a nice day. “For once in her life, it brought Song Ren no pleasure to have been right.” I was hoping Tredegar had somehow ended up with Tristian’s teacher or something. I didn’t expect her to get stuck in the zone or whatever happens when a creature comes leaves wearing your face. She couldn’t have, you don’t come back from that … right?? Well I guess we’ll find out one way or another. What if she’s stuck in there and everyone thinks she’s dead for months or years and then she pops back up. For some odd reason starting to think Imani doesn’t plan on holding her end of the bargain. As a matter of fact she might just be on the island to make sure a up and coming Tredegar is dead before she gets wise. Well that’s if she’s even alive who knows what happens to someone stuck in the zone. Maybe a navigator with a symbiotic entity could get to the bottom of things. Hahaha, man wouldn’t that would be something. Song having to ask Maryam to (risk im assuming it’s not safe for anyone) check down in the witching hour zone to see if Tredegar is alive. Well I suppose Maryam could earn some good leverage if Tredegar somehow is alive and starts carving her way to the High Queen. Emancipation for the Izvorica! I wonder what stage of grief I’m at right now … definitely denial.

Colin Love

Ever since Song said the entity has a soul the thought has been creeping into my mind that it could be related to Maryam’s mother. During their interaction the one time it’s made its presence known it was to force Maryam to accept “her legacy”. There were other names that it said but what was it that really got to her, the keeper of the hooks and keys? She did say her mother was a bit “mad” at the end. I could be way off base here but what if watching Maryam’s mother defeated and her people face destruction and slavery she decided to giver her daughter one last “gift”. I’m drawn to that moment during their face off when the last title was one she couldn’t reject despite believing that part of her life was dead and buried. There’s also the rescue of Tristian when she asked to work together and she succeeded. I see symbiosis and Yue could be right about her theories but where did it come from and why is it so focused on her family’s legacy. It could be something initiated by her mother or just a part of who she is like a magical genetic thing. Or something specific to Maryam’s people and she fits as the last person capable and or in a position to accept the “legacy”. There’s definitely more questions than answers even if I’m pulling at the right thread which I’m not convinced I am. Though I find it interesting that her mother was a powerful warlord and signifier who lost everything except her daughter. Now there’s a mysterious entity that by all rights should have eaten Maryam’s soul but has been helpful. Yue seems pretty good at her job and her words about eating suppressed emotions is ominous. Whatever happened to Maryam isn’t safe that’s for sure she either sinks or swims. I’m certainly interested to see where her story goes. I love all of the main characters to the point I even get annoyed at their faults. Though faults and imperfections are what makes them beyond just good characters. Rather it makes them human and relatable for reasons better when we see them succeed and worse when they make bad choices we find familiar.

ppbrro

Impressive. I wonder how you exorcise an entity

MapForge

Really really fun turn of events.

Dominic Corbin

I liked someone's hypothesis it was Nerei, but an unrelated intelligent bird is cool as well!

Notcreepycreeper

Ehh Tristan did the same, and like Fortuna kept saying, it would have been easier if he’d included them in his search for the 2nd instructor. Also, Angharad is less upset about honor here than that she thinks Song killed her ex, then lied about it for months. It’s an understandable position - especially given she had options. I really like the way this arc is playing out in the proper formation of the team. If no one tried anything else, then how would they know if better was possible?

Qahlz

> forcing a circle into a square peg Where does the circle go? That's right, the square peg!

Markos El-Far

Do you think Angie rejoins the 13th without an explicit story of what happened to Isabel Ruesta and why? I suspect theres more there than simple mood adjustment and Angharad being easy to sway by a pretty girl.

Aurelian Ungureanu

It was a long time coming one of Angharad's many blindspots came to bite her hard on the tuckus. Honor should not be an excuse to think she could so easily do without the 13th. First it was Song. Now I am looking forward to Angie's turn at recognizing how valuable each of them are.

Jean-Nicolas Denonne

I guess Miren was a trap...

TheLunaticCo

I hope the bird ends up a intelligent member of the cabal!

Joe Rachman

Seems like it's Angharad's turn to get the shit kicked out of her for a while now that Song and Tristan have gone through the process

joie01

HAHAHAHA YES this is such a fun development. thanks EE.

Aguido Horatio Davis

Ah. Oops. 🙂

Thien Dinh

Wowww she got possessed. I thought that might have been an issue

Patrick van Ballegooyen

Ending the chapter with such a massive cliffhanger is frankly sadistic!

TS

What a superb ending to this chapter. I completely forgot that trial and risk that Tristram went through.

MouseThatJumps

Song is learning to read Fortuna's lips, which could lead to some interesting spy techniques in the 13th. The birds are sus. I hope they end up being completely benign. Angie's trip to the Witching Hour was an even bigger fuckup than we thought. Great chapter.

PoiDess

OH DAMN


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