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Chapter 40

🕑 Added 2024-04-05 04:01:32 +0000 UTC

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andrew marturano

could you imagine, the bird is there on Tristan's shoulder and just no one mentions it

Matthew Flowers

Is Sakkas(Magpie) on board? It seems unlikely for character to be introduced just to be off screen for an entire arc

Matthew Flowers

Slaves mayhap, I expect the Hatchet Queen to ruffle quite a few feathers before putting a noble coop on the cutting board

Matthew Flowers

I think contract holders and Occult craftsmen might cut down on the maintenance and causality estimates. A mask and Watch discipline cut down on mutiny chances. But even with that in account I expect there to be at least 300 people on this ship

General Corteau

It’s not phobic to notice people are different, unless you think they’re somehow worse because of it. The entire point of this casual recognition is that it feels like just another aspect of a person, just like how they talk or the way their eyes are shaped are. It stops elevating that aspect and therefore lets it become a part of the normal fabric of human experience, which is exactly why it’s so interesting

MeYouIt

Why is that transphobic? There's nothing wrong with not passing, and while trans people have always existed, medical transitioning is relatively new. Also if a pov character didn't notice (and a super perceptive one I might add), we the readers woudn't know that he is trans either

dhighway61

It's upsetting that Tristan instantly clocked him. Why was it so necessary to note that he wasn't passing? Idk, seems a bit unintentionally transphobic, although I'm sure EE didn't mean it like that.

Kwight

Love the lecture chapters and I need more Osian Tredegar in my life

Berswoon

“How is Captain Imani, Angharard?” OOOOOOOFFF

Andrew Reise

Thanks for the chapter, also please consider releasing ebook/print book versions

MeYouIt

Agree 100%. You put it in words better than I could.

General Corteau

I think it’s particularly interesting because it viscerally highlights just how much western categorization has led to a much more conformist / narrow-minded framework about what’s normal, when compared to the casual worldview we see here in Vesper. It feels like something we might have seen in ancient India for instance, with the greater fluidity and the common acceptance of a more kaleidoscopic understanding of people. Western categorization is great but also clearly has its drawbacks.

Pedro Manoel Fabiano Alves Evangelista

I always loved that part of the world building in PGTE. It gets you thinking about how things should actually be

Pedro Manoel Fabiano Alves Evangelista

Poor Angie, trying to banter with Tristan and getting the cold shoulder... She must be really jealous of how well the rest of the 13th is doing.

Jacob Burton-Edwards

It's better than representation. Queer people of all stripes are just a part of the world, with no particular effort made to emphasize or hide them. The way we've never heard words like gay, lesbian, asexual, etc despite the clear existence of those people implies to me that those words have never had a need to exist in the common lexicon of the world, because those people were never singled out. Even corregido/gado describes what is essentially a medical curiosity rather than a social divide, as people who have corrected the error others made at their birth. This is the way the world should always have been. This is what the world could be, if patriarchy were excised from it.

Christoph Holz

Damn, now I am thinking even more about it… one hundred sailors to man the cannons, plug holes and command her, with enough loyal watch sailors to stiffen a newly pressed crew from Asphodel? And a hundred soldiers to quell mutiny and have a shore party at the same time. Maybe the watch wants a heavy hitting ship (40 guns is much in the age of the Culverine?) without losing too much loyal personnel? That would fit with the old Commodore.

Jacob Burton-Edwards

I would bet he was ordered to divvy up the oranges equally as part of their rations and chose to do it this way out of pure spite.

Nathan Fish

Captain Wen had made it clear that *while* should some disaster strike the student brigades could call on the Asphodel watchmen or the diplomatic flotilla, doing so without a great need would wreck their performance on the yearly test. “A spurned* lover, Tristan?” Tredegar teased. “Already?” “I’d be rather surprised,” Tristan said, “if the Mask were not already aboard."* There were around a* hundred sailors crewing it and by the looks of it almost as many soldiers. “If you’d tried one, you would know it’s not a* great loss.” Captain Tozi redeemed herself by explaining that the city of Tratheke was built out of a* massive Antediluvian ruin, which many believed to have been a university of sorts.

Dominic Corbin

"You miss all the executions you don't attempt." You've captured Wen's voice perfectly.

Dominic Corbin

Technical correction or correctly guessed plot points? Am I alone in finding both possibilities exciting?

Emmet Mackle

I think 'cattle' is being used to mean livestock here.

Emmet Mackle

Yeah, an Age of Sail gun crew would be at least 4 men per gun, not counting officers (though typically only half the guns would be manned at one time, since the ship would normally only be engaged on one side). Then they'd need scores of men assigned to the sails themselves to allow for rapid adjustment. Then parties assigned to plug holes and cut away wreckage, the ship's surgeon and assistants, ships boys assigned to supplying the guns with powder... A forty gun warship would have a crew of at least four hundred, often more to allow them to absorb casualties.

Ian Hunter

Thanks for the chapter! I'm just confused about one thing - if the Malani prize the sheep, why do they buy cattle..?

Joe Rachman

Tristan's lessons with Hage and Barboza seem promising. I'm hoping for Spy vs Spy level antics

MeYouIt

I really like the casual trans representation, tftc!

Aurelian Ungureanu

Considering the Dominion events, I could imagine Wen mentioning in passing to the 13th "I put in a formal request for ("the equivalent of a restraining order") against Tristan. He is to maintain at all times a certain distance from the Antediluvian. Failure to do so may result in hanging. You miss all the executions you don't attempt. *wink*wink*"

Machalt

Wen continues to be the best character despite his best efforts

Henry Lindsay

Thanks for the chapter, always a delight

Christoph Holz

Soooo the watch is smuggling cannon to Asphodel? Because they cannot hope to man even half of them without occupying all of their sailors.

Blind

Maybe he's letting them get attached to the prize oranges before slowly dismembering a poor citrus.

Joe Rachman

Odds that they blow up the docks?

Draken09

So when does he graphically butcher the oranges to make a point?

Matthew Flowers

Tristan should’ve known better

awakeatdawn

Their last island test ended in massive destruction, and we seem to be shaping up for more of the same on this island as well.

Dominic Corbin

I appreciated the lesson in local geopolitics, even if the cabalists do not

joie01

a healthy dose of praise and shame oranges from Wen to keep the scurvy away! what a caring teacher <3


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