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Chapter 56

🕑 Added 2024-07-26 04:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Nathan Fish

But her contract only looks 3 hours ahead; most of the time Tristan is not planning to kill her within 3 hours.

Thrackie Gregory

The Krypteia have found three warehouses that he -> house men In the brigadier brief section

Blind

Fun ending to ramp up the pressure. Interesting to see the trickle of bits of the plot the 13th hadn't caught on to so far. It felt like there were more grammatical errors and dropped or misplaced words than usual.

Blind

Maryam will eat pastries and take naps in between boiling her own brain chasing old ghosts.

RJ

someone who's grandfather *did something to help people against the established order and got burnt for it* What do you mean by that? I don't remember the reason Song's grandfather caused the dimmening every being talked about. Probably forgot tbh

Dominic Corbin

No joke. Song just has to put a bullet in Ai's head when that contract isn't active, and make sure the rest of the Yellow Earth don't think it's her. Not impossible for Song to handle on her own, but easier with accomplices.

Draken09

Oh right, I got mixed up on which band they were saddled with.

Ryan Hearn

My prediction for how Tristan will get around Tozi's contract is that her contract has been SCREAMING at her that Tristan has been the most likely source of death since they took the job to kidnap him And Tristan will work that out and make it a very simple job

Yonadav Shavit

Feel like this is could just be handled by Song “360 no-scope” Ren

a

Easy to lose this in the chaos of the meeting, but Hao Yu’s request of Song is exactly what a group plotting to kill Evander would ask for. And probably not what you’d ask if you wanted to keep the Rector in power. Yellow Earth has not cleared suspicion that they are behind the assassin!

Joe Rachman

True though I'm thinking less contract power and more status/rep. I want someone to get back home late, stumble into their bedroom, and shit themselves when they find Tristan sitting their waiting so he can have a quiet chat with them

Joe Rachman

Yeah I think that's more like her describing Ang's mind as like a blade

Andrew Simpson

All are free under heaven, and all men are equal, except those that we insist inherit their fathers sins and are shackled by our irrational hatred before they are born

Andrew Simpson

Well, time to ask Tristan how he feels about murdering some yellow earth folk. If Ai disappeared and song cooperated with the other dude, I could see her easily getting out of this on top.

Matthew Flowers

Does seem more like an Angharad problem to contain. But let’s be honest here Ai is gonna get the knife or the Ax as a solution

Benjamin Mages

I mean this isn't wrong per say, but it's too risky as it is. Unless she knows that bringing this up will completely end her attacker's threat forever, and Hao doesn't take offense to it and screw Song over, doing so is only better than outright refusing in that at least she gets the satisfaction of taking Ai down with her.

Dominic Corbin

"Double death" is 44 (4 rhyming with "death" in at least Chinese and Japanese, and in-universe Tixani(?)). 13 is considered unlucky in so-called Western cultures, and in-universe Sacromonte, and it's former colonies likely. If anyone else recalls better, please chime in.

sarvashaktimaan

Excellently done. Assaulting an officer of the watch is an exceptionally efficient way to give them blackmail material.

WaveySky

I'll admit this theory is super speculative. But in chapter 9 Maryam uses her Nav and describes Tristan as "like fire hidden away in a dark bottle, known only through heat and glint." This probably is more about how he hides his emotions. But you can kinda read that as a aether spirit wrapped up in a body.

Joe Rachman

Gods are aetheric entities something very different, to a human. I do think he has basically has a soul like a rubber band though, where others would get metaphysically suffocated or be sort of imprinted with a Saint mold his just keeps on stretching...

WaveySky

I wonder if Tristans is a 4th order entity. The class that first mentioned orders also mentioned that younger people having flexible souls, and Tristan signed his contract at 8 years old. What if signing that contract changed him? And the reason he's not a saint and can talk to Fortuna all the time is because he's aleady effectively a baby luck god?

Runaway_Cactuar

Tough day for Song. She should really stick it to those self righteous pricks by finding the nearest monarch and ride him like a rented mule ~ Speaking of Evander, methinks he'll be the last man standing after the smoke clears. Despite what the 13th think of him, he is smarter and more ruthless than what we've been led to believe.

Antony444

Well, it's not like Maryam can be really 'exploited'. Her family is dead, and it's not like they can be ressurected. I suppose her evil doppelganger could count, technically. And for Tristan, it's less 'exploited' and more 'kidnapped'. I would argue the Tristan and Maryam situations are very, very different from Angharad and Song.

Lewis

the power scaling isn't about how they scale apart, it's how they scale together: Song to see an opening in detail, Angharad to test the possibilities with that information, Tristan to pull luck to act on the best of Ang's results, and Maryam as the cannon putting force behind it. Future-sight and Luck alone is an incredibly powerful combo, adding good information and summon-giant-monster to that is even better. And cabals can go up to, I think it was, seven people? I expect them to add a diplomat at some point, and there's several good options for that already.

Lewis

Typo catch, if this is the place for those: Tristan ought to pleased, wherever he was -> Tristan ought to be* pleased, wherever he was Glad to see Evander Pallaides getting credit for being in the game, as he certainly deserves it. Even if the credit comes in the form of angry Yellow Earth (also deserved.) I don't think it's a coincidence that the cult contract ties to the coup.

Joe Rachman

I'm dubious about Tristan as a stable Saint - it seems too pat. I expect something a bit more esoteric - and I think we know his contract's limits. Frankly if we're going for hilariously OP contracts Song's ability to not only see everything, read contracts, and blink to instantaneously take in and process every detail is absurd.

Lucy Severine

Truly I've not hated someone in this story more. Seeing yourself as a revolutionary and then trying to punish someone who's grandfather *did something to help people against the established order and got burnt for it* really pushes my buttons, apparently!

Lucy Severine

Lmao I'm a freak and even for me this is an unhinged take

Oliver Schell

I think Song won't murder her, but deal with Ai regardless. Can't have people push you around like that .

Mag1cM

Honestly, everyone except for Song (at least for now) has some hilarious setup for broken power scaling. Angharad has her contract with the fisher that is just releasing new features like a early access game. Maryam has a demonic body double that can randomly give her new powers that might frankly include just about anything. Tristan is supposedly a stable Saint with a luck god. Something like taking luck from people with a touch is very much in the realm of the possible. At that point he basically becomes immune to damage and his enemies just selfdestruct.

Darryl Greensill

Angharad, when she recovers

Emmet Mackle

What a vile person. 'Inherited rule is bad! Hating an entire family for something their grandfather did thirty years ago is fine though. This is totally philosophically consistent.' The self-righteous attitude is particularly grating, I'd have far more respect for her if she didn't pretend this extortion was somehow morally justified because Song is a filthy Ren.

Victor Cavalcanti

Damn, there sure are a lot of folks that need murdering. Tristan's gonna be a busy lad.

Webwoven

The sexual tension between Ai and Song is WILD. I can't be the only one who sees this. If you're a woman and you call another woman "yiwu" then you're at third base, minimum, and then on top of that, Ai called Song's whole bloodline "nasty"? gayest shit I've read in weeks

Draken09

So looking at all this... I think Maryam is now the only member of the double-death brigade who doesn't have an external faction attempting to exploit them? Tristan has the Ivory Library. Angharad has the Lefthand House. ... and now Song has Yellow Earth.

Cotillion

Not sure Tristan will be blackmailed like Song and Ang, he’s just got the kidnapping pressures. Maryam… who knows. She kind of has a role apart from the rest.

vy

song cannot catch a fucking break omfg 😭

Joe Rachman

Also obviously the protags are never going to get as OP as Cat. But I am looking forward to when they've accumulated enough power to become proper terrors and can push back.

Joe Rachman

So what will Tristan and Maryam get blackmailed over do we think?

Gideon

Oh yeah, Ai is gonna die

awakeatdawn

You get a treason! And you get a treason! Treasons all around.

Haydn Nitzsche

Tftc! Songs gotta get Tristan to have a chat with Ai >:(


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