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Chapter 71

🕑 Added 2024-12-27 05:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Pteromys Momonga

It could probably go either way. One of the advantages of the web serial format is that it's easy to introduce lots of minor characters who have some sort of memorable detail and have them pop up again on occasion. This both makes the story feel more like a full world where characters have lives and are doing stuff even when it's not relevant to the plot we (the audience) see, and it also feels more natural when a character goes from background to supporting or supporting to primary - like they've been the protagonist of their own story all along, and now that story has linked up with the one we're following. On a similar note, a character who dies can still affect the story afterward. Isabel, Yong, and others who died on the Dominion have had lasting influence on those who survived. I hope Izel and Cressida stick around, but even if they don't, Tristan could get an assignment from Hage to continue a project Cressida was working on, or the Thirteenth might end up encountering Doghead Coyac.

andrew marturano

so was William in PGtE and he got the boot

Joe Rachman

They seem to characterised and connected to interesting things to casually kill off.

Aguido Horatio Davis

Nah he will sell it to some charge by the word fly by night and we will never see it again after the contract forces him to take it off Patreon and the web, then the company goes broke.

Pteromys Momonga

From Hooks' memory of being "devoured" in the womb, it sounds like Maryam is something similar to a genetic chimera (where two fertilized zygotes end up fusing), but in a spiritual rather than genetic way. I'm guessing that the combination of one twin dying while the other survives, along with the surviving twin being a Gloam user, is fairly rare. It also seems like the extra step Maryam's mother added to the Cauldron ritual might have been what split Hooks' soul/consciousness (along with the Cauldron) off from Maryam. Hooks noted that Izolda Cernik didn't make mistakes in matters of Craft, so I wonder what the intent of that extra step was. Maybe she knew about the extra soul and was trying to make a backup version of the Cauldron, but instead it only went to Hooks? We know she was upset that the ritual didn't seem to work, so I don't think separating Hooks and the Cauldron from Maryam was the intended result, but she must have had *some* reason for it. I'm curious to find out!

Aguido Horatio Davis

Yeah, that. Exactly that. Honestly, it's a trust issue. If *I* were an apprentice Navigator who had just discovered *why* my Grasp and Control were so maladjusted and how to fix it; *and* that I had a second soul to call upon while attempting to survive and thrive in Scholomance, that would either be an enemy that couldn't be risked, or an ally that couldn't be passed up. Here's hoping it ends up the latter.

Pteromys Momonga

My interpretation was that Maryam's belief that killing Hooks was fine had been fading ever since she started getting evidence that Hooks hadn't taken anything intentionally. She was just doubling down, even in her own thoughts, because she couldn't bear the idea that her choices were to murder a being who was essentially another victim, or stay forever in her dead-end position, unable to fulfill the hopes of her mother, her mentor, and her culture. Even before she found out who Hooks was, she'd moved from "killing this thief is morally justified" to "it's not this creature's fault, but this is no worse than killing an animal for food," to "this isn't a morally good choice but it's the only viable choice I have." At this point, I think every character has done the same thing at least once: convincing themselves that what they're doing is right or necessary, because the truth is too painful or too frightening to bear.

Pteromys Momonga

Something I noticed a few chapters ago but didn't think to mention: Cressida was almost obsessive about getting into the Deicide class. We know why, now: Imani told Angharad that Cressida's home was destroyed by a plague god. That's probably the root of her interest, whether her goal is saving her home, getting revenge, or just ensuring that doesn't happen to other people (she seems like the vengeance type). I hope she and Izel survive somehow; they're interesting characters.

Aguido Horatio Davis

The Thirteenth *does* need a scholar…

Quack

Genuinely an amazing casting choice

Darryl Greensill

If they ever option this for a TV series (and I hope they do), I want them to cast Matt Berry as Lord Locke!

Darryl Greensill

Marriages of political convenience in European history didn’t necessarily consider age gaps, though the prospect of an heir was important it wasn’t essential, someone else would be named as heir to the position. Interestingly this world takes gender equality as a given so presumably same-sex marriages of convenience occur there too

Darryl Greensill

I’m hoping she ends up Rector and Evander gets exiled to the Watch, Jon Snow style

Qwertz

Typo in the Song-part: She ought to hold her shot, not her shit (lmao)

PoiDess

Spinster’s Milk is turning out to be our boy’s signature at this point

Aguido Horatio Davis

So Maryam had a sister that she already murdered once. On the plus side, we finally have something that smashes through the smug certainty that killing someone to loot their stuff is okay if *she* does it. And it’s working. There does turn out to be a line and she’s actually thinking about what to do to not cross that line. Looking forward to seeing the next scene in that arc. Meanwhile, Tristan and Song, ladies and gentlemen. This is why you don’t mess with professionals. And over in the other corner, Angharad of house Tredegar is about to show why you don’t mess with gifted amateurs, either.

A Total Sham

Its really funny how the pairs have flipped since the start of the book. The pairs have changed from Song/Angharad and Tristan/Maryam, to Song/Tristan and Maryam/Angharad. I could not have seen this coming and I love it.

A Total Sham

Contracts are probably my favourite non-character focus of this entire story because its such a broad magic system while also being comprehensible, and it shows off the unique nature that divinity works in Vesper, and also gives an insight into culture and characters. With Kiran, Song noted him as being a contractor in chapter 40 but it never came up what he can do. My guess is combat-based. From Imani, we got that he was crushing it in duelling tournaments, possibly for skill but it might be his contract giving him the edge. He didn't use anything special here, and I think he would have if he could. Any sort of defensive option against the fire or gas he would have, and he knew that if he got to Tristan he could practically one tap him, so its not worth paying a price for that. The 13th has kinda spoiled us because none of their prices are that bad, but I always think of how bad some prices like Briceida's was, and that's the last thing Kiran needs. If it would have been a problem, Song would have told Tristan, but he told her there was no way he could beat even Cressida, so she might have not thought it necessary. Idk, I'm rambling right now. Tristan's still got the heavily poisoned knife and Kiran did get the most Sweetsleep because he dunked his whole arm in, but I'm still nervous for him. Maybe Kiran will break out and try to kill him and Izel will stop him? Not sure. We have to unfortunately wait, ugh.

Joseph

Kiran has a contract? Why didn’t song read it?I wonder wars with all the variables of contracts and gods, every country has their old, new and stable gods.

A Total Sham

Am very smug about guessing Arkol as the Ecclesiast so that's fun. I'm curious to see what the fight with him will involve. Our experience with the various magic systems in Vesper has not included what powers priests can have, aside from contracts, and how you combat/defend/defeat something like that. A bullet to the head or a blade will probably work, but I imagine that a god like the Hated Ondyssean gives some nasty weapons to its priests. I remember there was a vague theory that Hooks might have been Maryam's sister, but interesting that this confirms it. This is wildly interesting, but also a massive unknown. I imagine that deaths in the womb aren't uncommon in this world, but why did Maryam's sister's soul stick around? I thought that Maryam wasn't intended to hold the Cauldron initially, but was thrown it in a panic, but I could be wrong. It might have been that there was a lingering from Hook's soul, but when Maryam got her obscuration, the gloam and the nav gave it something to lock on to. Hook's soul seems malformed, as she says that she was shaped by the waste emotions from Maryam, but didn't have any truly individual emotions aside from the basest natural emotions like fear and hunger. Still much to learn. I do think that Maryam's gonna get a hell of a boost to help out Angharad, but this burst of sympathy needs to become something to build on, else they'll just turn on each other down the line. Tristan's part was fun, and love his creativity. Still think that Izel's gonna get the invite to the 13th, but might need Song there to hash out the details. Tristan's still in a murderous mood. Am mildly worried because we still don't know jack about Kiran's Contract and whatever contract with Chekov that might involve. Song's was simple and brutal. Wasn't expecting the 4th to be involved, but Candlesteel and Gloam are some solid counters. This is gonna turn into a mess on the streets of Tratheke, and I do think the Lictors are gonna be a big help against the Yellow Earth. Ai/Dongmei needs to get popped, which is gonna be grisly. She's such a smug zealot, the only reason I like her more than Doukas is cause she's snarky, and I still can't wait for all of them to get the boot. Merry Christmas EE!

A Total Sham

Hehehe, I'm rather feeling rather smug and vindicated right now.

A Total Sham

Honestly like, thats probably the best outcome. She's been dragged into it by some cultists and her plan was to just wait it out but they said nah. She's really giving off the vibe of the designated driver, while everyone else is getting crazy on a night out. That being said she's a pretty ruthless enjoyer of realpolitik almost collapsing Evander's reign in his first year and crushing the merchants. She's very persuasive here, and puts on a very approachable and sympathetic act, but she might still squeak away. The shipyard is too much of a liability, and he might get killed, so she might be able to pull off the "good moderate" ruler, who will end up keeping asphodel as a stable backwater.

Dimeji Abidoye

I think Evander takes the black and Apollonia rules in his stead

Andrew Duan

Damn I can’t keep discovering that I like all these characters man. Floros seems cool as hell and I feel bad for her honestly. When this all goes down, I hope she dies quick.

Joe Rachman

Fits with how he fights as well. When competing for the Deicide spot the technique was similar, the obvious threats to draw attention and then he slips in the real attack while they're distracted.

Mace

ngl did not see the Maryam bit coming. well played

andrew marturano

It keeps coming back to spinster’s milk huh

Joseph

Future seeing contract are banned in Malani, which could be because of the fisher himself so anyone who knows the origin of that could know the fisher himself.

Joseph

Tristan’s method of neutralizing the contract was brilliantly written. There are many stories where someone has to get around someone’s power and I just roll my eyes about, but this is great and extremely clever, using different poisons was already smart, but using a less lethal poison that they can get rid of, so you can get them another way is brilliant, I understand Maryam’s rage, she has been fucked over so many times, her people and culture are dying, she wants to be the fucker even if it’s just this once,

sapassde .

Better to betray her ambitions, who hasn't had a change in career after decades of efforts in an area.

sapassde .

I'm pretty sure she's way too old for that to be considered.

sapassde .

They probably realise either what type of being he is or what he would have given her, and her being contracted to something the Perpetual Queen would not like is what makes them say she's bold I think.

Joseph

I am afraid to completely read this chapter, just jumping, things are going down.

Joe Rachman

The fact that Locke and Key appear to know Fisher and be somewhat impressed that Angharad contracted with him does not seem like a good sign...

Avid_Appletree

There is a reason why out of all the members of the 13th Anghard fears conflict with Tristan the most.

Runaway_Cactuar

"Song aimed her pistol but the angle was off, forcing her to hold the shit" It's not healthy to hold it in, Song~

JD Wessinger

Fantastic chapter, really great to see everyone's growth starting to pay off in a variety of ways. My 2c is on Apollonia marrying Evander after in a political marriage as a way to stabilize after the attempted coup

Ryu

A Mask who learned about poisons from the same teacher, a Skiritai, a captain whose contract literally warns her of danger, and Izel goddamn Coyac, incapacitated just like that, played like a fiddle one and all. Shit, he didn’t even use his contract. That was just… most satisfying.

Machalt

Maryam is genuinely the person in the 13th that Angharad trusts the most, which is really wild compared to where those two started

Dominic Corbin

Absolutely devious. Poison Tozi with hemlock as a misdirect for her contract, paralyze/knock out with non-lethal Spinster's Milk to incapacitate, then ACTUALLY kill her with hemlock. What a mad lad our Tristan is.

Rune of Doom

She's set herself up so that it will be very difficult not to. And either way, she's betraying something: her people's knowledge and her own family, or herself and her ambitions.

Merlin

I love angharad flipping her shit at somebody calling maryam a savage, they have come so far

Ed

so maryam is sukuna, angharad is 007, song took a page of PGtE and tristan is a critic of picarescas novels. also i am pretty sure the times are different, tristan's plan was at five and song's at six.

vy

ong i would give EE my first born child

silvergazer31

I don't think she's going to go through it, not now.

Machalt

I'm prepared to give EE both kidneys and one lung in exchange for the rest of the book right now

Machalt

The soroicide didn't take the first time, so now Maryam has to do it again. Don't you hate it when that happens?

vy

angharad my beloved maryam my beloved song my beloved tristan my beloved i would pay 50 bucks for the next chapter waiting is actually so painful

ppbrro

God cant wait for next chapter. When she was first introduced I thought hooks was the mother but I quickly discarded the idea, i guess i wasnt that far off. -- Fishy to the rescue !! -- Will Song follow both of Tristan's advices now? Who knows -- I still think Tristan might be able to capture the god using the ritual they were trying to create and send it on its way to a few high value targets. Also i lol'd that Angy probably thought of Tristan around the same time he was thinking about how to get out of hsi binddings. As always, thanks for the chapter!

Rune of Doom

Wow. Just... wow. So much magnificent storytelling here.

joie01

aHhhhhh

Pteromys Momonga

A point to everyone who mentioned Lord Arkol! I'm surprised one of my guesses about Hooks was right after all. Captain Yue would probably have a field day figuring out how that connection works...

PoiDess

Also, I've lost the bet then, ah well :)

PoiDess

Tristan you absolute maniac

Skulldragon7

“Deep down, be both know that.” ->we both know that


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