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Chapter 72

🕑 Added 2025-01-03 05:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Noble Solana-Walkinshaw

Gods I love it when they have competent opponents! That Cressida analysis was badass. Not quite what I expected to happen which was all the better.

Noble Solana-Walkinshaw

I’m in the same boat!

Joe Rachman

"They might misunderstand." Is low key one of the funniest lines in this book. Song is inadvertently comedy gold

Pteromys Momonga

Huh, if they're headed to the Reeking Rows, they might run into Song and company. I think that's in at least the same direction, since Song and the Rector argued about it on their first trip to the brackstone brothel.

Trekkie Monster

Worth pledging just for this, damn.

PoiDess

Hard agree on cressida joining the 4th.. it does make the most narrative sense apart from possibly the 31st or imani’s

PoiDess

Well, bets are on izel joining the 13th and him fixing it. Or tristan guilting bait to fix it.

ppbrro

Ya he defo played the long odds with the change of plans

silvergazer31

so I don't think Cressida actually saw as far ahead as Tristan is assuming. I think she genuinely did make a few mistakes (caltops, etc.) BUT realized what was going on with the Spinster's Milk fast enough to drink the antidote, cause Tristan found her hunched over her own Poison Bag. Maybe she tasted something in the water, maybe she figured something out? From there I think she just waited to see how it was going to play out, let the antidote work and either get out when Tristan started killing the rest. That or wait until he killed the others then surprise him so she could get the payoff all on her own. But when he offered to let them live, she waited more to see how it played out, and that was that.

Andrew Duan

I always had her pinned as Tristan’s opposite. Less cunning and less talented in spy work but far more competent with weapons.

York

Tristan might have figured that, with Izel being a person of principles, it would be harder to convice actual collaboration if Tristan killed any of the others. Having teammates murdered really sours a working relationship, no matter how transactional. It really was an all or nothing gambit. Fortuna should be proud.

Julius Dubasas

I assumed that her antidotr simply took time to shake off paralitic effects. It's not that she couldn't move, she couldn't move well and Tristas is scary.

Persephone

The greatest loss in this chapter was Vanessa's Watch. RIP.

Poop McScoop

Yeah, she definitely exists to be Tristan's foil, and the 4th is where that role would be accomplished best.

Joe Rachman

Good point, but the Mask politics around Tristan seem complicated. Remember in his dossier Nerei complained about The Ivory Library but Asher blocked action from being taken. Hage was almost definitely aware but might not have been in a position to act. (Also I just realised Hage's test for Tristan to steal his own dossier might have been a way to subtly help Tristan giving him a tip on The Ivory Library and some of the bigger players.)

Avery Cortell

I actually think Cressida was a double agent/plant the whole time, or almost the entire time. I mean, one of her mentors is Hage, who she apparently found after following Tristan. Would Hage really want a traitor Mask running around when that's exactly what Mask's are meant to cull? And there's no way she hid that from him when his whole thing is information. So I'm guessing that Hage gave her a heads up, at least about some of the stuff Tristan would use.

Colin Love

Nice to see a shred of decency left in the world even if it was ultimately a sense of self interest tipped the final hand into play. Almost feels a bit like there's a teaching moment in there somewhere. Though forgetting the role luck played wouldn't be fair, interesting reaction by Fortuna I'm not sure I remember her taking such a direct proactive role before. Not that she hasn't been helpful in moments of crisis far from it. Although usually her help comes wrapped up in her special brand of banter that accompanies her active presence.

Joe Rachman

Is Tupoc such a bad choice to join? Yes, he's insufferable and can be murderously treacherous when its pragmatically in his interest but he's also clearly very competent. Taking out a Ladonite dragon with one unlucky casualty and then being diligent enough to the investigate the temple is not a mean feat.

Clément Lanteigne

I'm glad Cressida duped Tristan. She's been a match to him before, but at the safehouse she seemed strangely incompetent, letting him get away with spying on them and setting up nearby. The first time he spied trough the chimney I assume she noticed it and let him get away, I expected her to get redeemed instead of Izel.

Clément Lanteigne

I was thinking this as well. She's ready to sacrifice her teammate to save herself, much like Tupoc betrayed Leander. But I don't know if she can work under Tupoc, beign similar does not mean compatible.

Evri

Idk I feel like it’s fine for a talented Mask. I think a lot of Tristan’s schemes would seem the same way if we weren’t able to see inside his head.

sapassde .

Like another comment said, the 4th seems perfext for her. That kind of relationship fits very well there and she can also suffer Tupoc.

Gwennafran

My rule of thumb is to do nothing before a third description settles the direction. I did the same with Fortuna, that had green eyes at first.

Pteromys Momonga

I was thinking about how it might affect your next set of portraits, actually!

Gwennafran

LOL. I can't believe someone caught this before me. EE at his finest once again. XD

Pteromys Momonga

I was actually thinking she might join the Fourth as well, just for the irony, but given the choice between Tupoc and being assigned to a group of spares... tough to say.

Ryu

The way I see it, time constraints forced Tristan’s hand. You have to remember that he made the decision to help his friends barely an hour prior. It’s one thing to murder an entire cabal, but it’s an entirely different thing to coerce them or one of them to do something. Tristan didn’t have too much of the information needed for the latter, and so much of what he did was based on assumptions. If anything, that he still tried speaks volumes about his development. He knows he was being sloppy, but he was very much desperate for their help.

A Total Sham

Unironically, I see Cressida ending up with the 4th at the end of all this. I don't know how scholomance rules work with changing cabals after succeeding on the yearly test, but if someone technically completes the test and then switches the cabals, they might have to do a second test, which seems rough. Possibly if they switch Cabals into a cabal that has already completed it, they don't have to and that's gonna be interesting. With Izel, the 13th is the obvious bet, he's got a reasonable relationship with Tristan and out of character makes sense. Cressida will only have two options: the 4th or the 11th. The 11th as a cabal I don't see making through this, cause after Imani's got the forge and has held up her end of the deal, either Angharad or Osian is gonna kill her. That leaves the 4th, who has recently lost a member, can take in poor lost souls, and already has a frenemy of the 13th in it. Wonder if she'll get a stupid name too, I can just hope.

A Total Sham

Cressida reminds me of a strange mix of Lan and Yaretzi. She's a rat to the bone, but also smug, haughty and cruel. With people who join the winning side, it can work for them alot but has its limits, look at Tupoc, everyone hates him, but he's really good at being on the right side at the right time. The issue is that if you are in the same locale and if you aren't useful, you'll burn your way through every bit of goodwill. Unless she makes some strong allies, Cressida's going to be left out in the cold. My guess is that her parents got destitute after the plague god, and the Ivory Library offered them a future for Cressida. Maybe they bribed her parents who ended up selling her to the watch, but we don't know. She did get tetchy when Tristan joked about her family having a rough few years. I imagine her motivations are similar to Tristan about revenge, but she never had a healthy Cabal. All the 19th never really meshed, Tozi was the driving force, Kiran was the muscle, and Cressida and Izel were stuck with them, they were together not because they chose it, because the Ivory Library made them. If Cressida actually had someone to care about, maybe she'd mellow out. But now she's just a chronic backstabber.

A Total Sham

Was not expecting Cressida to make it through this. Izel yes, because he is best boy, but Cressida surprised me. She reminds me alot of Lan except with sword skills and somehow more smug. She is very much a "noble rat" in character. Good riddance to Tozi and Kiran. I'm a bit sad we never got to know Kiran's Contract because I love contracts, but we never got to know Ayanda's so I'll live. While I was distinctly hoping that Tristan would be the one to off Tozi, but it makes sense for Izel to be the one to do it. Tozi reminds me alot of early Akua, with the noble politicking and claims of a grand bloodline justifying excellence. Her contract was defeated the same way Angharad's can be, doesn't matter if you know the future if you can't react in time. Remember when she was introduced and Song said that nobles would have a private war for her contract? Nice to see her noble status was being teased that early. I don't see Cressida joining the 13th. Doubling up doesn't seem impossible in a cabal, but Cressida is too flightly. Her only principles seem to be to win, and Angharad already doesn't like her, Maryam would probably want to off both of them, and Song wants someone reliable. Izel can very much be a part of the 13th and would fit in well. He acted in an honourable way to protect Tristan, so that's a yes from Angharad. I'm looking forward to him talking to Song, as both of them have a stubborn moral backbone. Maryam's probably gonna be the hardest to move, but with Tristan's help she'll come around. Still very surprised at Tristan's mercy with the 19th. I was expecting him to keep Izel to traverse the layer, but not trying to get all their help. Maybe he was just after numbers? It was still a bit of a strange move, and while I appreciate the kindness and his appreciation of his friends, this was too close. It could have been a good call on everyone except for Tozi, she was way too obsessed with returning to her birthright. Also RIP Vanesa's watch. Maybe Osian will be able to fix it.

General Corteau

Can Song see boons? That might be one… alternatively it’s not that hard to drink random antidotes to cure yourself of anything that might come in later.

Rune of Doom

It seems perfectly in character for a talented Mask. Making note of what poisons your peers have makes perfect sense, and from there the rest follows. As soon as Tozi's contract changes to hemlock, Cressida can put together that Tristan is there for them. She doesn't even need to guess that he's going to try to gain the advantage and then talk, she just doses herself with antidotes for everything he's likely to have immediately. She doesn't supply the antidote to Spinster's Milk for everyone (it's expensive and takes time to work even if she does have it) so she fakes it and sees what Tristan will do. He doesn't start with killing, so it's better to play along that go for a risky 1v1 while he's wary. She likely freed herself subtly very early on, meaning the risk was minimal.

Joe Rachman

Cressida's decision to fake poisoning etc stretches credulity a bit. Being able to guess Tristan's strategy, his poisons, and then to run the risk he just slits her throat before she gets free of the bonds seems all too big a risk for the pay off. EE is usually more careful than that in plotting though so I'm expecting a reveal of some form. My fist inclination is Cressida some contract but Song would have spotted that. On the other hand Cressida's been hinted before to have some unusual ability - see her ironclad confidence that the other two Mask students wouldn't spot her when she and Tristan arranged to ambush them. Add to that Pteromys' eye colour spot and I'm beginning to spin some truly outlandish mental theories involving twins, doppelgangers, or a secret priesthood of some form. Either way odds on at least a hint before the end of the book.

Ryu

Lucky that Tristan’s got the measure of her character now when she’s forced to be not against him.

Muirenn Andréa Mc Mahon

This was a top tier chapter for this book, damn

Aguido Horatio Davis

I think there is room for two more cabalists in the Thirteenth.

Joe Rachman

Yeeeees. Also just going to say I called it that Tristan would poison them then bargain to save the 13th. I'll now bet Izel will join the 13th while Cressida will remain at a distance as an appealing but mistrusted ally of convenience.

Pteromys Momonga

I think she has a goal related to the plague god that destroyed her home, and that's why she was so desperate to get into that Deicide class (she was probably furious at both Tristan and herself after she broke their alliance and he ended up getting the spot in the class anyway). Which makes her a great foil for Tristan, along with the other parallels you've mentioned; they're both likely seeking revenge for their home/family. How the Ivory Library got involved is still a question, of course, and even our local Malani spy doesn't have an answer...

Ranger Science

Ho lee shit. Absolutely excellent, and, truly a bet on long odds.

Ryu

I see everyone’s cheering Cressida but if anything she’s got my hackles raised, because that’s a rat if I ever saw one. It’s like she’s Tristan if Tristan never had Fortuna, didn’t have Maryam or Song, if that made sense. She is him except where Tristan spent time trying to change she spent hers falling deeper into her ways, always saving her own hide, always choosing the winning side. Worst of all, she’s *good* at it… And we still don’t know what drives her. On another note, what a chapter. Always did enjoyed Tristan’s povs the most. I think he just got Song a Tinker for the Thirteenth.

Pteromys Momonga

Huh, Cressida's eye color apparently changed between chapter 25 and this one; I remember finding the description of "cool brown eyes" unusual at the time.

Karl

Good for Cressida. She definitely would have gotten a failing grade in Poisons if she let Tristan drug and murder her.

Clément Lanteigne

Thanks for the chapter!

Indigo

YEEEEAAAAHHHHH LETS GO IZEL!!! LETS GO CRESSIDA!!

Dashaya Toney

Tristan my goat. By far the best character.

DerWipe

Thanks for the chapter

Dominic Corbin

Cressida is a terrifying little minx isn't she?

ppbrro

Oh damn

PoiDess

Hot damn

awakeatdawn

Tick tick tick Tristan

Pteromys Momonga

Wow, at least three amazing moments in this chapter alone. Tristan choosing to risk everything to help his cabal - gave me goosebumps. Izel deciding enough was enough - not surprising, but satisfying. Cressida proving she's a worthy rival to Tristan in wits as well as stealth - fantastic. Can't wait to see Tristan (and his new frenemies?) pop out on the other side of the layer!

Pride

Love the development for Tristan! Every one of his chapters is a banger

Markos El-Far

Two snakes down, 1000 more to go

joie01

hat friend cressida barboza is so back

joie01

holy moly


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