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🕑 Added 2022-09-16 16:08:51 +0000 UTC21 sketched pages! about a third of the script in one go!
massive spoilers ofcourse! and a horrible place to make a cliffhanger XD but this is enough sketches til the next sketch session in 2 months. took me a little longer than expected, turns out I can only do 3 of these pages in a day!
but holy heck this is going great! >:D this comic is so horny I love it! I was a bit worried about the pacing, since they are doing the same thing the whole time. but I think because the end of these sketches leads into the endgame (probably another 20 pages), that this works just right!
I hope you enjoy! and I will try and complete the first of these pages by tuesday
if you want to help me find writing errors, this is the time!
any typos you can find, mark down the page and the typo in the comments (for ref of my style: combined words are on purpose like "ohmygod". capital letters only on names and "I". commas only when the line is seperated in the same wordbubble. no dots ). if something else bothers you about my writing, like saying the same stuff too much, let me know too! because I am rather blind to it.
I will revise the pages one last time when it gets to coloring.
you can find the all the sketches of this comic over here: Drive Link
Comments
Izzy
Adam out here being a sex-positive gigachad
spidercat
I can't believe Brad is missing out on all this lmao
