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on the road - 5
🕑 Added 2024-07-09 19:05:27 +0000 UTCpage 5 already!
I'll have to get back to writing this comic, I have more pages thumbnailed and written, but I am gonna write myself in a corner if I don't do a second pass XD and I see the exclusive on the horizon, so I will start early with writing.
I do know where the story is heading, just not how the dialogue gets me there yet.
so... I'll see you all after I have written and sketched a few more things! X)
find the comic over here for easier reading: Drive Link
Comments
Manigeitora
We (the total dorks of the world) stan a total dork
Vostoros
Wow I didn't know you were a Dutch artist! Op het moment leer ik Nederlands in een taalcursus aan de universiteit. Ik hou van de klank van de taal en de leuke mensen. Ik vind het echt geweldig dat mijn favoriete artiest uit Nederland komt. π Bedankt voor je prachtige werk en hartelijke groeten uit Duitsland! π§‘
Dingus
"Babe wake up, Funkybun just posted"
Dohyden
Yeah, 'camp' is the casual / non-formal version of 'campsite' and 'campground'
Todd Whitesel
Campground is fine, i see that on road signs here in California
Dohyden
Sorry I over explained. That's interesting that it's the actual word and not just the common mix up of "thing word" vs "action word" which i've seen a lot in my years
Funkybun
well it's not so much that I'm confused about how english works. it's just that the dutch word is litterally "camping" for a campsite, so that's just so ingrained in my mind that it feels wrong to deviate XD. but yeah campsite is what im looking for
Dohyden
English is such a screwy language I know. Like, you go for a drive not a driving, you go for a swim not a swimming. Camp is a noun... Camping is also a noun... Gosh I hate my language sometimes. It means you have places like "Camp Redwood" or "Totara Camp Site" places you go for camping. So you go to a camp to do some camping
Funkybun
oh really? I guess yeah camping is dutch for camp grounds then. I really thought that was the same. though camp feels like it has the wrong connotations, like its organized
Dohyden
Hehehe such a wonderful story, i love the flow and how casual it all is :3 I don't remember if English is your first language, or maybe it's not the first language of the character but "look for a nudist camping" isn't quite right. Camping is the action of going to a Camp Grounds. So he'd be "Looking for a nudist camp"
Jonathan
Epic!
Tentomon4
Hope we see more nudist stuff in the future.
Sean Frisbey
ππ
Manigeitora
The squiggly mouth line is what really sells it for me, it's a perfect visual representation of how your mouth does that thing when you're nervous.
Danny Webby
Nick is a total dork and I love him lmao
LambChop
Your ability to craft stories that feel natural and real is legendary. I had almost exactly this conversation with my (then) partner not long before I came out as trans.
Kuroi Usagi
Yees, indeed π
Quadrant
Wait until he puts those nudist plans back on the menu π
Manigeitora
Your characters saying "mmf" does things to my brain
Funkybun
yes XD but with an excuse
Kuroi Usagi
Isn't "Purposely forgot" same as simply "left behind"? π
Marcus Heckinberry
Probably my favorite page so far. Just looking at it does things to me; probably brings back a few memories tbh. I love what this story is insinuating and no matter the outcome, I can't wait for it!
gab
Finn's face getting embarrassed is so adorable I can'tttt
Quoll
All those car shots are quite exquisite!
