el_XoX
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EARLY ACCESS~ ASMR step sis is stuck in the washer
🕑 Added 2021-03-14 19:18:43 +0000 UTCI made sure to add the shoving for you degenerates
Please let me know what you think and what can be improved. I am still new to nsfw ASMR it will take me a bit of time to get better <33
omg this is so bad sorry and its all a meme too.... i think
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el_XoX
credits~ Art- https://www.pinterest.com/pin/825355069180016052/ https://www.pinterest.com/pin/837388124440267978/ Shower sound effect https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kEGD0bZ3Iyk and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f5WkDBbieAU Door open and close https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kU-AjaAUeeM Fridge opening and closing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fTqxszWcxLk Opening glass bottle https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJLDzJFJsUk
How'd I get here? I'm scared. Mom please pick me up now! But fr Great vid
Jellypocalypse
Well that's certainly an interesting one - but amusing, and well done once again! Minor things to think about again: At the 1 minute mark, maybe increase the volume on the drinking- this one's truly minor, but it sounded weirdly quiet to me. 1:25 - The "Just my towel, let's go" sounds kinda dorky imo, I'd cut the let's go. 1:50 "Just like our uncleIn his fifties" - space the end of "uncle" and begin of "In his fifties", the cut is noticeable cause it almost overlaps. 3:56 - Raise Volume on the "Hey Stepbro [...] I'm waitiiiing", atm doesn't really sound like talking to someone in another room. 7:36 - "Wait, slow down" - Nothing to really fix per se, but the expected reaction here would be to speed up out of spite, or maybe that's just me. "Fucking cream inside of me please" was an amazing line in context. 10:00-ish & onwards permanently sounds to me like it has the reverb on, in spite of talking 'outside' to the stepbro sometimes, kinda breaking what was established so far. Mostly on the gasps & breathing. Overall, great work!
