SARTAK3 fanbox

Perverted Daughter - [bad dream]

🕑 Added 2023-04-15 19:01:24 +0000 UTC

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What a good job you do, I liked the touch you did to fill her sister giving her more attributes (very few do this and I'm glad you did) and how they look with this alternative ending I would have liked a bad ending where they manage to capture the protagonist and use it as a skin suit. great job again and new sub.

Thanks for enjoying it!

IFBfrost

I just think there is no need to be limited to reality, may it be better to let oneself go,LOL.By the way,thanks for creating this series of works~

I see what you mean there! But yeah that could be for another ending that i'll be making later on... but the thing that i was focus here on this ending is that everything that just happened on the story is just a nightmare that the daughter had been experiencing, but yeah sorry if it's a bit abrupt :3

IFBfrost

Thank you for creating this excellent work,but for me personally this ending is a bit abrupt,it's just a dream and the daughter is defeated by bad guys break the rhythm of the story to a sudden halt.I think it will be better if the daughter burst forth strength to defeat these bad guy and get their skinsuit so she can enjoy the pleasure of both men and six women at the same time,then just give a picture about the daughter wear more skinsuit and enjoy the pleasure as the ending.This rhythm may be more in line with me personally.But finally,Thank you again for creating this series of works,looking forward to more excellent works from you,and take care of yourself~