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NHRK Chapter 62

🕑 Added 2023-09-15 04:23:52 +0000 UTC

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Lost Samurai

Thanks for the feedback! I'll take a closer look into Tayuya's speech habits as soon as I can and will amend this chapter accordingly. Please, if you have any other qualms in the future, do make more suggestions like this. Really helps the process!

Hiems

So I think one of my only real concerns is how characters speak. Now I’m fine, for the most part, with changing them. Especially when it comes to them becoming more intelligent but I’ve seen in the newest chapter you’ve given Tayuya very.. well spoken dialogue. She’s by no means unintelligent but sticking with the more abrasive, rude and arrogant way of speaking would be better suited. Otherwise? Awesome job man, lovin’ the story!!


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