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NHRK Poll in regards to Chapter 71
🕑 Added 2023-11-07 11:21:09 +0000 UTCWere you guys overall satisfied with the R-rated scene in chapter 71?
I feel that I should go back and change the chapter to add more anticipation, more teasing before the 'act'. Since this is the major scene we've been building up to, I felt like it needed a bit more oomph...like a pre-sex shower scene, coming full circle to the earlier chapters.
What do you guys think?
P.S: I sound like a broken record, but I'm sorry that the chapters aren't coming out as quickly as I want it to. After next week, I will only have one exam left (rather than being drowned by the eight major assessments like I am now), and there will be christmas break after that, so I should have more time to write then. For now, it may just be a chapter per week for this week and next week. Gomenasai.
Comments
God of Wind 200
If any Naruto and Kushina sex scene should have been longer if anything
Vamble
In my opinion the scene felt rushed compared to others in this story so far, especially when this was the one I been waiting for 😂 but it was good non the less
