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Considering Axing Chapter 64-71 of NHRK - done
🕑 Added 2023-11-09 00:54:43 +0000 UTCAfter rereading these later chapters, I feel that I could have done a lot better from Chapters 64 onwards. To me, these chapters felt rushed (and I can't lie to you guys, they sort of were), as one of the factors that influenced me writing this in the way that I did was that I didn't want to let you guys feel that I'm stretching out Naruto's and Kushina's relationship/getting together longer than necessary, like I'm stringing you guys along and only saving Kushina for the end.
But as a consequence, I've drifted far off from what I planned for the novel, and these days I feel like I'm hitting writer's block after writer's block trying to move this story forwards.
This, along with what october has put me through, the later chapters weren't up to par with my standards.
I can move this story onwards and power through this if necessary, but I think it'll be better for both me and the story to axe chapters 64-71 and rewriting it as fast as I can.
What do you guys think?
Edit: It seems that the majority of you don't mind the story as it is, which brings me a bit of relief because that meant I did better than I thought I did in the last chapters. I will now continue forth into the unknown, officially going off the rails. Hopefully we'll end up somewhere not too terrible. I have made edits to chapter 71 now and its looking a bit more pleasing, though you will only see the changes after I upload chapter 72.
Comments
Hersh Jobanputra
Your narrative possesses a beautiful, organic flow that captivates and intrigues the reader. It's essential to resist the temptation to mold the story into perfection. Embrace the concept of balance, the delicate interplay of "Yin and Yang." Perfectionism risks stifling the natural essence you've already cultivated. Remember, it's the peaks and valleys that create a truly engaging journey. Allow the story to breathe and evolve, embracing its imperfections as essential elements of its charm. In this way, the narrative can reach greater heights, resonating more deeply with readers who appreciate the authenticity of its twists and turns.
Dustin
While I really anticipate the new content you put out, I think it’s important to do what you’d like to do. If you feel like you’d rather redo the past few chapters I’m sure we trust you’ll do a good job.
